Loved

Loved

A Story by Rustling Leaves
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How would you like to be loved?

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"How do I want to be loved?" She blinks before smiling. "Quietly."

"What do you mean by that?"

"Just... quietly. It doesn't have to be loud. I want to be able to look behind at them, and- know. Feel it."

© 2024 Rustling Leaves


Author's Note

Rustling Leaves
I don't write about love a lot. This was just a small thing I wrote a few months ago that I found in my notes app. Main character is fictional. What does this invoke? Is it boring? Confusing? It's incredibly simple on purpose so that it's easy to create your own idea of who she is, and who she is talking to.

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i am a chocolate and roses guy, but i do respect people's differences. i think i've met a few girls who are into this 'quiet love.' i liked them, although i never got far with them, i do hope they got what they were looking for.

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

When a love isn’t with you, that love should still be felt. Quietly when they aren’t present to tell you. That’s how this brevity spoke to me Rustling leaves. Yes, love should be present always.

Posted 3 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rustling Leaves

3 Days Ago

That is exactly what I was going for, thank you Chris!
Chris Shaw

3 Days Ago

You are welcome :)

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Added on November 22, 2024
Last Updated on November 22, 2024
Tags: Romance, short, quiet, love, fiction

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Rustling Leaves
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I've been writing since I was young, I'm in college, and I'm wanting advice on how to improve my writing. Compliments are nice too. -Psithurism means "the sound of rustling leaves." more..

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