His Daughter
A Book by Rustling Leaves
 A young girl is called down to the dungeon by her father. The butler leads her to a cold, dry cave, where she finds her father and a monster.  © 2024 Rustling Leaves
Author's Note
 |
I am bad at dialogue, here's my practice book. I tend to edit a lot before publishing a chapter, but some may be less edited than others. I hope to receive reviews about the dialogue, story flow, and character consistency. Compliments are also appreciated!<~<
|
|
|
Author
Rustling Leaves
About
I've been writing since I was young, I'm in college, and I'm wanting advice on how to improve my writing. Compliments are nice too.
-Psithurism means "the sound of rustling leaves." more..
Writing
|
Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Read Request
My Library
Subscribe
Flag Writing