I express

A mother I am,

A wife I am,

A dreamer who dreams,

A co-worker, whose work screams,

A friend you can believe,

Your stress I can relieve.

I can be an ear to your sorrow,

Some sugar you may borrow.

So many feathers in my cap,

To the music my feet can tap.

I dance to the rhythm of my soul

All I need in my life is a goal.

A goal to proceed,

A goal to succeed,

For life without an aim,

Gives no worth to my name.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

My first poem in Writer's cafe. I was browsing through this site and saw a contest to express ourselves.
This is me, the free spirited one - still looking for an Aim in my life.
Please provide your valuable feedback.
Thank you:)

Reviews

[Mary Christabel George]

"Beautiful"was the first word that came to my mind, when I read it.
A very positive poem, very refreshing.
Understanding who you are & what do you want from life are the most important things to be discovered when alive instead of just running after someone or getting influenced by others.
A sense of belonging is important but so is goal which takes us to the purpose of living.
Welcome to this crazy world of "Writer's cafe".

[Prynka]

Thank you Mary for your time and kind words.

[Abraham Kureshi]

nice write...beautifully expressed...

[Prynka]

Thank you GS.

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Expressed well!!
The sugar which I can borrow, this line was really sympathetic to me.
Lovely written.

[Prynka]

Thank you Tahsin for your time and kind words.

[Tannu Prajapati]

I loved this lines. beautiful poem.

"For life without an aim,
Gives no worth to my name".

[Prynka]

Thank you Tannu.

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. The last line sums it up. I loved this.

[Prynka]

Thank you :) and thank you for your time to read my poem.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're most welcome. ☺

[AYVID N]

For an initial post, this poem is very good. It is simple, sweet and has good rhyming.
"I can be an ear to your sorrow,
Some sugar you may borrow."

I really like that. Please keep writing and it will get better and better.

[Prynka]

Thank you Divya for your time and valuable feedback.

[AYVID N]

You are welcome to Writers' Café Prynka. It will be a pleasure to read more of your poetry.