In this edition of my poetry audio blog, I discuss the nature of reality, or at least the one we can perceive. It is another spacey, mystical journey. We start at Venus, return to Earth, to stalk the elusive white whales, and finally travel within. I read the poems the Sylph Sings, the White Whale, and From Nightmare to Lucidity. The delivery is soothing and ASMR style.
For you reading purist, scroll on down and you will find the Sylph Sings for you wordy pleasure.
The Sylph Sings
a fiery, fickle, and shifting façade
keeps would-be explorers and pilgrims
at bay, their desires turned elsewhere
there are easier landing sights
other virtues to be claimed
alluring and dusty glory
where the red will flow
for those who wish to be first
the god of war is surprisingly easy
to pillage and plunder
where’s the fun of planting a flag
in a sizzling mist, where no one can see
your pole unfurl and flap
you can’t colonize the clouds
grasp the sublimated, mechanize the molten
good luck remoulding tephra and ash
to the whims of order and utility
the goddess of love…
remains aloof and untouchable
yet in her isolation
the sylph sings
a beguiling but elusive siren
a coy trickster
she writhes a syncopated serpentine
weaves silky ribbons and stays
not to be unlaced
bathed by solar tempests
galvanized in the heat
Venus forges an ethereal
but unforgiving shield
bruising and scalding the clutches
of would-be voyageurs and conquistadors
The Sylph Sings is published Domesticate the Heavens. Please visit myblogto further explore the accompanying photos and essay, some bonus poetry, and keep up-to-date with all my writing.
Pryde, you have a wonderful way of combining the real and the fantasy, human traits (positive or negative), and myths and mythos within human possibility and imagination. There are many worlds in our universe/cosmos, but so far, only one that we know of has evolved thinking creatures who can reach for the stars. In our minds, we create monsters or sirens out of inanimate objects, giving them human emotions. And by doing so, we find our humanity and create art in all its forms. We also discover that there are worlds where humans will never belong or live. But we will never lose our desire for knowledge, to know the unknown.
-Curt
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So well said, Curt. This is a really wonderful review. Made me smile:)
Bathed by Solar Tempests... we are in the midst of a Heavenly Eclipse... your poetry songs are a Comfort as we Believe in Earth and Prayers... We are all on this Planet to survive. You are Amazing dear Pryde... tenderly, Pat
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Ah:) Thank you so much, Pat. Your words too with their poetic and sublime air are soothing as well:)
Pryde, you have a wonderful way of combining the real and the fantasy, human traits (positive or negative), and myths and mythos within human possibility and imagination. There are many worlds in our universe/cosmos, but so far, only one that we know of has evolved thinking creatures who can reach for the stars. In our minds, we create monsters or sirens out of inanimate objects, giving them human emotions. And by doing so, we find our humanity and create art in all its forms. We also discover that there are worlds where humans will never belong or live. But we will never lose our desire for knowledge, to know the unknown.
-Curt
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So well said, Curt. This is a really wonderful review. Made me smile:)
This wonderful poem explores the idea of conquering Mars or Venus and human desire to extract precious materials from it. They found rocks on the Moon and they are in museums. Sorry, no gold, gas, petroleum yet.
Future holds lots of wonders in your poetry.
Very interesting to know your books. Yes people struggled so much for their life. Well claps are with two palms joined. When one does whole lot what is other doing?? Does it not be shsred. Anyhow i left to fate i hav more serious problems than having sex to enjoy. And my lover my man my husband is safer with me. A bug can eat fruit till it gets the food to eat. Once that ia finished it will look for another.
Thank you for sharing your insights twillight well noted.
If at all i were to look for sex then we would hav not been untouchables. This is what we are and world knows about us. Else hindu gods never given respect in temples.
We live and we show how to live we also take life to make others live.
Reg acid rain maynot be me but some one will definitely will do.
Hav you read recent news about killing of united healtg care insurance company CEO by 26 yr old guy. I was hav serious issues with that ceo and was angry on him how he is using people money never paying claim reimbursements but someone got shot him dead. See many people have problems with others someone or other will definitely take action..
Anyhow i hav problem with sastry and many others too where she was involved. Definitely someone will take action i will do whatever i can.
Coming to small and easier first.. no sir i am pointing at right real big and the only short.
This is not a chess game to plsy politically this is real honest war like self destruction when it comes no ayudha remained what is remained is you to destroy evil.
Well you know better than me.. no need to explain in detailed.
Reg boiks who will enjoy your books are me and you as it talks about us.
I think books sre written like so..
Jessy Jacob.
Sorry typos i dont hav much clear typing when speed of thoughts get involved. It doesnt mean my ghoughts are puzzled .
I dont want correct it hough i can but only tk make you feel tge jntensity of reply.
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Indeed it is the deeper and lasting connections that have real value; who can blame poor Venus for s.. read moreIndeed it is the deeper and lasting connections that have real value; who can blame poor Venus for shielding her affections; perhaps one day she will find a true mate, like our moon:)
I really amazed at your thoughts so crytal clear. I couldnt dare to walk on those roads but definite.. read moreI really amazed at your thoughts so crytal clear. I couldnt dare to walk on those roads but definitely the happiest night i wiuld so that noone get control to say anything to me being having some fun.
I am having things which i felt more close to me here in this city more than my hometown. But i do miss watching those eyes.
There are two ways one is good and one is bad. Obviously two different persons they are.
One would say moon is cool and bright on full moon. Though there are spots it looks beautiful with those.
Another would say there are dark spots. They make it look weird.
I want to say that how much ever they look good thry pinpoint something mak8ng them look ugly by their angle of bad thinking.
We will say god is great but few say god is great because we are so inferior.
Breaking boundaries is possible but breaking lovers is a sin which ruin your own love life.
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The Divine is infinite and undefinable. I don't think there is time enough for us to even begin. You.. read moreThe Divine is infinite and undefinable. I don't think there is time enough for us to even begin. You have a great night. I should be over to your writing soon:)
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Thank you. Be careful my dear love.. what can i say to you my daring heart..
Only i could see.. read moreThank you. Be careful my dear love.. what can i say to you my daring heart..
Only i could see restless hands that keep on writing....
I see myself uncontrolled when you have now full control over me....
The path is clear so foggy as we go deeper into elevations these float behind us camt come there ...
To our only loneky space where eyes can still see but cant perceive our deep kiss wetting our lips by the dew on our tongues so clean and pure...
Do welcome you back on to my page and love land where no limits no boundaries what you can drop or scribble..
But be careful my dear love i dont want to see you falling and break a bone as christmas night is just near for us waiting to exchange our gifts....
Never mind the white whales, now Pryde is waxing lyrical about monsters; with no Captain Ahab - or brave warrior to save us from her exotic word tapestry.! And yet, it actually makes sense..!
Well, to fellow writers and fans; it makes sense. This poem discusses the nature of seeking glory, and how related motives may not necessarily be; as they might at first seem.
So easily, people try out the "low hanging fruit"; before actually putting themselves in real danger. So long as, their end goals are still achievable - of attaining glory, pillage; and plunder! Those objectives often being referred to, as the "spoils of war"...
And yet, men stand proudly, planting their patriotic flags - as if to say that patriotism is their sole heroic goal.!
Such trickery, and hypocrisy! But, love has nothing to do with this; so the goddess of love "remains aloof and untouchable". I don't blame her.!
Indeed, Venus (that goddess of love); remains defiant with her "unforgiving shield". But, as gods do; she goes the extra mile. Not only, refusing to forgive these toy soldiers for their fake tom foolery heroics; but also bruising and scalding the very clutches of these people..! So, she's thorough too.! Evidently, putting that old frying pan to good use.! Clearly, very modern in her ways; and one hell of a proactive feminist deity. You read it here, first..!
Now, go listen to the Pryde audio; for extra perzang..! Listen & learn.
Or, you might fjnd that your clutches are bruised or scalded - by deity of poetic writing: goddess Pryde..!
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I really enjoyed this review. Indeed any woman capable of being conquered is not woman worth trying .. read moreI really enjoyed this review. Indeed any woman capable of being conquered is not woman worth trying to conquer ... but I jest. I think Venus is just looking for her match and then maybe she will cool down enough to nurture life. Wouldn't that be amazing?
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