The Wisp
A Book by Pryde Foltz
 The opening to my novel series, Slip Treaders. Have a listen or read.  © 2019 Pryde Foltz
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Bara dreams of the dark-haired boy, but one blustery day, the dark-haired boy is replaced by a silvery spectre who haunts her even when she is awake, pulling her deeper into dreams and closer to secrets she is better off not knowing. Waking up is no relief. The fictional east-coast town of Windfall offers its own surprises: immortal witches, coffee-loving werewolves, and dream boys come to life. A dead man's diary names Bara a Clavigen and calls upon her to cage the evil. She must defeat the witch who has ensnared the Wisp in a piece of enchanted amber. Unfortunately, the dreams have not revealed all. Always watching, a demon waits to prey upon her young soul.
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i love the "Wisp" ... have my treasured signed copy looking at me right now, Pryde ... i do not forget many of the images and battles engaged in your story ... still admire and love your heroine ;) thanks for the peak you have offered here ... pretty sure many others will want .... "The rest of the story" ;)
E.
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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5 Years Ago
I do believe you were one of the first, if not the first. Certainly, you received the first sign cop.. read moreI do believe you were one of the first, if not the first. Certainly, you received the first sign copy. I do appreciate your support, E:) Thank you:)
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5 Years Ago
:) .................. love the story..especially unforgettable library she lived in ... hmmmm i have.. read more:) .................. love the story..especially unforgettable library she lived in ... hmmmm i have a book on the Celts almost finished ...then a new one from Grisham ... i think i need to read Wisp again ... its one of those stories that when re-read presents a lot of details missed ... peace on Earth my friend!
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2 Months Ago
Hey, E. Never saw this comment. Sorry to have missed it:)
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2 Months Ago
:) ..................
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i love the "Wisp" ... have my treasured signed copy looking at me right now, Pryde ... i do not forget many of the images and battles engaged in your story ... still admire and love your heroine ;) thanks for the peak you have offered here ... pretty sure many others will want .... "The rest of the story" ;)
E.
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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5 Years Ago
I do believe you were one of the first, if not the first. Certainly, you received the first sign cop.. read moreI do believe you were one of the first, if not the first. Certainly, you received the first sign copy. I do appreciate your support, E:) Thank you:)
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5 Years Ago
:) .................. love the story..especially unforgettable library she lived in ... hmmmm i have.. read more:) .................. love the story..especially unforgettable library she lived in ... hmmmm i have a book on the Celts almost finished ...then a new one from Grisham ... i think i need to read Wisp again ... its one of those stories that when re-read presents a lot of details missed ... peace on Earth my friend!
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2 Months Ago
Hey, E. Never saw this comment. Sorry to have missed it:)
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2 Months Ago
:) ..................
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"The doppelgänger was gone. The man was gone. All the other passersby had disappeared too. But Bara wasn’t alone. A solitary form approached. The dark-haired boy!"
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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"Gentle gusts blew through layers of whispering leaves. Those with the lightest grip let go and cut red and gold traces through the air. They settled soundlessly on the pavement below."
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Thank you, Sami:)
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5 Years Ago
You are welcome Pryde...
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Excellent first chapter. Your narration is spot on. Is this available as an audio book?
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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5 Years Ago
Thank you, Val. No, no audiobook yet. I am still a cottage industry over here... that is I do everyt.. read moreThank you, Val. No, no audiobook yet. I am still a cottage industry over here... that is I do everything myself ... and so for the time being, there is no time to accomplish the work involved in producing a full on audiobook. But they do come in both ebook and paperback. With the ebook, you can take it wherever you want. That's convenient:):):) All for the price of a fancy coffee:):):)
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Just in time for Halloween. Spellbinding and horrific. Pulls you in and won't let go. Very powerful take on this. You are very talented.
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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5 Years Ago
You are very kind. Thank you, Sami:)
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5 Years Ago
You are welcome dear poet
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a beautiful chapter,reminds me of fall that we can`t seem to find,98 here today
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5 Years Ago
Thank you, Ron:) Wow ... that is hot. We are well into the chill here but a pleasant chill:)
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5 Years Ago
lol,96 today,but temps in the 80`s next week
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