A Tiger Adrift …spoken word to Gymnopedie No 3

Swim, Little Kitten, Swim ... not just for KL:):):)

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing verbal poetry dear friend. A very enjoyable listen.
Coyote

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Coyote:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Pryde.

[andrew mitchell]

Just as well animals have a survival instinct as do us, as life is a sink or swim scenario. Its a cruel setup nature. Nice write Pryde.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Andrew:)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Strength presented with tenacity...a story of survival perhaps...a hope and faith that endures...or perhaps an innocence that survives the naivety of the cocoon to find its wings. At some point we all must swim. Very nicely presented.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Fabian. I think it is all that you said. Mostly some comfort the writer:):):)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so metaphoric...

i see this describing how there are always those in life out to hurt others, and we try to find refuge from them, lifeboats to pass by them safely...we sharpen our proverbial claws of sustenance...but there others with sharper claws, bad intentions...

and the reference of little kitten...in order to survive we must get past the naivety in life and understand it can be a bad world...we must beware...
but if we survive the sharks, we can find waters of serenity.

one of my favorites from you.

j.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Jacob. This is actually one of the first pieces I wrote for WC. Something about it gives me comfort even after all this time. Yeah ... the world can thrash one about. Hope your night however is going swimmingly:)

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

So genuine and so full of veracity. The thoughts that prevail in the mind of a mother have been vividly pictured and exquisitely expressed. Love the way you entwine words and present them before us as a wonderful piece of poetry. Life always offers us choices, and what we choose yields us the corresponding consequence. Your work is really moving. Keep writing.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Vatsal. A beautiful review:)

[Einstein Noodle]

makes me think of a mother's perspective on her children .. fathers too ..but mostly mothers .. or our Creator towards us all ... we do go adrift at times ...and seem to be all alone at times .. even tings that seem would offer salvation can not be grasped ..nor rested upon ..especially liked the tiger pic and your repetition lines getting softer .. (sexy whisper there my friend;) i was pleasantly surprised the poem did not end there ... the waves added to the enjoyment ... i think you do fine work in all your presentations .. it would take me more time to figure out the mechanics of it than it did for me to compose a sonnet ;) arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrgh!
E.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, E. The whole mother thing is not was not intended but I can see where it is comeing from. The piece is meant to console and encourage. These videos do indeed take awhile to put together. The poem must be writ, the poem recorded, visuals found and edited and then all put to the time of the music. I am started to work with time lapse as well and so there we go:) But I do love the finished product.

[Einstein Noodle]

so do i ...and so glad you take the time and present them here ...

[Pryde Foltz]

:):):):):):)

[Avinash]

Very heartfelt spoken words like the words of a tigress to its babies.

[Pryde Foltz]

Than you, Avinash:)

[Sami Khalil]

Sink or swim...Such is the choices you give your reader in this marvelous message. But you ask them to keep on swimming midst dangers like Sharks and so forth until we reach the shore of safety to roar again...An excellent one, Pryde...:)....................

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Sami. I love when you visit:)

[Sami Khalil]

Same here. You are welcome. ..:)))))

[wordman]

reminds me of the tao poetry,great wisdom

[Pryde Foltz]

You think. I do find it oddly calming. Thank you, Ron:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

that amalgamation of thought and realness, how divine, well done.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Thomas:)