Tic Toc Tic

A Heartrending write about when it is time to get over it:)

Published in Strays

B00NQ44CGK

Reviews

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A poem of hope for the dumped and broken hearted....

The heart breaks and time passes as it tries valiantly to repair itself and beat anew for another....

An interesting write, and quirky, too.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks you, Doodley:)

[William Liston]

Your voice is so melodious...I absolutely loved listening to this. It's simple yet beautiful...really conveys a strong feeling of melancholy that I think anyone can relate to. Well done, Pryde.

-William Liston

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, William:):):)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most striking piece that falls no where and grabs us all darling, well done, good read.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Thomas. Just a little poke at my own melodrama:):):)

[Tiana]

Fantastic! Loved hearing you recite your poems! Enjoyed it a lot.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks so much, Tiana:)

[Inject Positivity]

So beautiful!!! It reaches the deepest and hidden cores of the heart and leaves it feeling mesmerized... So beautiful...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, IP:0

[Coyote Poetry]

This was amazing. Outstanding verbal poetry dear Pryde.
Coyote

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Coyote:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Pryde.

[Alfred Kukitz]

I remember the time we met. Somewhere in a far off universe dangling words in front of our heads. It's always a surprise to feel you kissing my face with poetic utterances that bring blush to my face.

Pryde you are inspiration and fun!

Regards,
Al

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Al. No kinder words could be spoken to another:) Especially the fun part:):):)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Pryde, You are brave to share
your feelings. It helps others to feel
well-adjusted. A fascinating movie...
almost like a silent movie but very
Informative for moving on. truly, Pat

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Pat. I am drawn to the idea of poetry as healing and so here I go:)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Pryde, I am drawn to his blue eyes which
are very healing... and so here I go...

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you:):):)

[Papaya]

The puppy dog gets me every time.
Who can stay mad at a puppy?!
Nice little poem, creative delivery.
Crying is good. It's like cleansing.
Not all the time, but sometimes.
May I offer a shoulder? :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Yes ... crying is a release. It helps release the built up grief energy. I wrote this piece awhile back. Doing well now. Thank you, Papaya:)

[Papaya]

Happy to hear! :) you're welcome!

[Lyn Anderson]

As always a thoughtful write and wonderful presentation.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks, KL. Always love when you visit:)