A Rational Fear of Nakedness and Bright Colours

A little spoken word summer beach disco fun

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Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

very clever ..highly intelligent trip from fashion and fusions of the mindless ego ;) ... i like the naked part the best! ...
on a more serious level ... enjoyed the music ..made me think of surfing .. thank you for the peak behind the scenes (so to speak) of women's fashions .. from corsets to bloomers to ?????? well ... whatever it is that is just before the being naked .... you are saying far more than meets the eye and for one ..i have to listen a couple more times .. never wanting to miss something important :)) love you Pryde! great avatar!
especially like the "thought then the feelings" (i believe it) .. and you are one in a million to take the stand on the side of expansion .. brave young lady ..hurrah for you!!! if battle with Jenny ensues ..you let me know Ok?? i am on your side! :)))
E.

[Pryde Foltz]

I wrote a response to you and then ... boo hoo it did not take. Thanks E. Of course the poem is for men and women. I am bit confused ... who is Jenny? Why are we battling?

[Einstein Noodle]

Jenny Craig ... diet queen .. she would rather fit the woman to the corset rather than adjust the seams ;) i hate when we write something and are satisfied ...only to have it glitched away in a click ..second time around never seems to be as "perfect" ;) hugs and great fun for you today and always Pryde!

[wordman]

but of course i would have to be present to watch this transformation,but on as a critic mind you

[Pryde Foltz]

LOL ... I am but observer. Thanks for the visit, Ron:)

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

Your poetry always brings me serenity and pleasure. This one has been penned awesomely- as always. When you express your thoughts in your unique style- usually flushing with lines of wit- the reader's mind is engulfed by and engrossed in contemplation, feeling, emotion and appreciation for your writing. Keep writing.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you for this very kind review, Vatsal:)

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Pryde, so very clever and true...
I can't help but ponder... it is the curves
that make fashion more vulnerable.
Dressing can be like art, choosing the
mood and environment to apply the
colors and style. A masterpiece with
the music of Mozart or your choosing.
An inspiring work of art. truly, Pat

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Patricia. Curves are indeed wonderful. Always very pleased when you visit:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved this one. Alive and worthwhile words. I had to listen again and added to my favorites.
Coyote

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Coyote, Confession ... I love listening to this one too:)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Poet.

[andrew mitchell]

Funny, funky, how nakedness brings colour, maybe some closer lol after all, nakedness is a dead give away on who's attracted:):) A fun write with that ounce of truth.:)

[Pryde Foltz]

That it does indeed. Glad you enjoyed:)