A Rational Fear of Nakedness and Bright Colours

A little spoken word summer beach disco fun

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Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

very clever ..highly intelligent trip from fashion and fusions of the mindless ego ;) ... i like the naked part the best! ...
on a more serious level ... enjoyed the music ..made me think of surfing .. thank you for the peak behind the scenes (so to speak) of women's fashions .. from corsets to bloomers to ?????? well ... whatever it is that is just before the being naked .... you are saying far more than meets the eye and for one ..i have to listen a couple more times .. never wanting to miss something important :)) love you Pryde! great avatar!
especially like the "thought then the feelings" (i believe it) .. and you are one in a million to take the stand on the side of expansion .. brave young lady ..hurrah for you!!! if battle with Jenny ensues ..you let me know Ok?? i am on your side! :)))
E.

[Pryde Foltz]

I wrote a response to you and then ... boo hoo it did not take. Thanks E. Of course the poem is for men and women. I am bit confused ... who is Jenny? Why are we battling?

[Einstein Noodle]

Jenny Craig ... diet queen .. she would rather fit the woman to the corset rather than adjust the seams ;) i hate when we write something and are satisfied ...only to have it glitched away in a click ..second time around never seems to be as "perfect" ;) hugs and great fun for you today and always Pryde!

[Gray]

Everyone has their interpretation and in mine I couldn't help but think of the 18th century. It must have been the corsets that did it. There was also a movie in the seventies though I forget the title where they were all naked by the pool. That popped into my head too. Your words are intellectual and accurate.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Grey. A timeless piece perhaps:):):0

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

a telling and quirky piece here my love, your intelligence shines through as always, well done, good read.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Thomas, This growing to be one of my favorites:)

[Matthew Ian Herrawood W]

To be honest I didn't finish this I found the background music too destracting and it made it hard to hear you sometimes. I like written poems as it's easier to take your own message. Have you ever tried a beat poem?

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Matthew. Preference is a funny thing. I love the music that accompanies this piece. I find myself re-listening for that very reason. No I have not tried beat. Hope your night is going well:)

[Pryde Foltz]

You can of course ... mute the sound:)

[Matthew Ian Herrawood W]

ahhh earlier I didn't watch the video. I was in a situation where I had to visually mind my surroundings but could still listen. I then later wrote my review. I'll give this another look later.

[Pryde Foltz]

no worries

[??????]

Ok Pryde with a big grin hearing all the way to the end:) I must say this was quite awesome:) but you know my humor lol. How did I feel hearing it was like a cosmic adventure full of colors from the 60s-70s the Woodstock days as you will:) And as my Grandma would say lets go Streaking lol. You may find what I am about to say crazy but you would make an awesome DJ or talk show person. I swear your words the voice it sets all. It's mind blowing what you come up with each and every time to all. So yes 100% awesome sauce:)

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks so much, UP. Made my day:)

[??????]

Smiles always :) your welcome:)

[sL]

It is important to remember that the world was once inhabited by people "with feelings capable of forming a universe," and that maybe a few of the beings alive today could keep it going. But, like you've said people seem to have forgotten our purpose.

Thanks for reviewing my poem so that I might be directed here and hear yours! I'm excited to listen more. I'm excited to think about recording my own... I hadn't really thought about it. Inspired by you.

[Pryde Foltz]

That's wonderful, Stephanie. I look forward to hearing your work as well:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this reminds me of us in the sixties...dealing with the older generation who seemed ashamed of nakedness, and hesitant for change...we took our clothes off and rebelled, the new generation or at least the new times seem to find all of us putting every stitch back on...and hiding our nakedness.

well done...rationality is not one size...we can't be afraid to be who we are.

j.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Jacob. I only ever lived the 60's vicariously but I think there is a bit of revolution of consciousness going on as we speak. Thanks for popping in. Always a pleasure:)

[Lyn Anderson]

Funny, clever, and really neat presentation.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks, KL:)

[Alfred Kukitz]

I can tell you this much........can we just hold hand..........please?

Regards,
Al

[Pryde Foltz]

Who knows what the future will bring. Thanks Al:)

[Amber Lily]

What's truly special about you're poetry is that they have the power to make me think! How did we make such a huge jump from corsets to modern day clothing? (Although corsets are still used today they are rather different.) An interesting thought I must say. Bravo :)

[Pryde Foltz]

That's great. Thank you, Amber. Always nice to see you:)