Constant ... a Little Love Scribble

Our thoughts betray what lies beneath and between us all

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Reviews

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As a scientist, i was prepared to argue that there is more than one constant......until i reached the end of your poem and understood fully what constant you were referring to.

Despite my difficulty with your format, it doesn't take much effort to realise that you have a way with words. Your use of language is inspired and takes your poetry to greater heights.

Very nice work! ( and no need for another return review! We are even at the moment! Haha!)

[Pryde Foltz]

You don't want me to read more of your work ... I am a pay it forward kind of girl. Love your review ... yes this a metaphysical constant ... qualitatively changing and impossible to measure but always there if you know how to look for it:):):)

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No! I didn't mean that! Review all you like. I just owed you a review first.....you were ahead in the pay it forward race! And you still are! Haha. One review coming soon.

[Pryde Foltz]

Yes ... I think that is how you win in pay it forward ... lol. Hope you are having a wonderful morning:)

[Corset]

That was so lovely, the presentation of love energy, the very light fabric of the world, beautifully engineered.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Corset. I love your words:)

[William Liston]

I thought this was a very beautiful poem. I think the background music really helped to set the atmosphere. I'm not too big of a fan of spoken-word poetry, (because I like to read the words myself), but i loved this. Very professionally done. Great work.

-William Liston

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, William. Some people like to create the voice. The good thing about my approach is the sound can be muted and the script paused if one prefers quiet:)

[Lydia Shutter]

Love never leaves us once it is there. It is always there though it might shape shift. It is energy and never dies. Lovely thoughts. The heartbeat was a nice touch. I have difficulty not being able to read the words. The meaning seems to seep into my psyche more easily when I read the words. Lydi**

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Lydia:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the only constant is that we make love inconsistent, because we think ourselves out of it for one reason or another....

j.

[Pryde Foltz]

We do that, don't we ... I hoping once we understand the link between egoic love and thoughts we can mend this a little. Thank you, Jacob:)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Well the shades of love in her entirety never blend well, well done great read.

[Pryde Foltz]

Blending ... not often ... we do like the drama:) Thank you, Thomas:)

[Papaya]

Your readings are super, Pryde. I like the message in this one.
We don't fall in and out of love. It's always there. Sometimes we just travel with different vehicles.
I still love a couple of my exes. I always will. They were good for me the time we were together.
The Hollywood love sounds great and I used be a silly girl that believed. :)

[Pryde Foltz]

You are exactly right. Thank you, Papaya:)

[andrew mitchell]

This had a little bit of Tao in this write. The message clear the love unconditional. :):);)

[Pryde Foltz]

It follows me wherever I go now:) Thank you, Andrew:)

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you thank you thank you. There is no such thing as love that is predestined, although we are all predestined to experience love -- which is not the same as assuming there is only one love for each of us that we are searching for -- and true love is unconditional

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, KL. The movies feed our minds with some pretty high expectations on what to expect in the love world. I had one friend who met the love of her life on her very first date ... but most of us will have to chew on a lot of coal to find a diamond. But love is love:)

[wordman]

real love is always unconditional,and you tied it with the universe, meaning never ending
loved it !

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks, Ron:)