your philosophy comes through loud and clear ..i can' believe you used corpuscular in a poem ..well done says i! :) your poem's sublime sadomasochism gives me a glimpse of understanding that sort of "love" tho i don't think you mean to go that way ..as a metaphor love does most always involve other pains ... of heart, mind and soul ... i appreciate Rippled Sublime taking me through to a free cell all shed ... and rippled ;)
E.
Posted 8 Years Ago
8 Years Ago
Thank you, E:) Hyperbole and vicarious thinking is involved in this one ... comes from trying to und.. read moreThank you, E:) Hyperbole and vicarious thinking is involved in this one ... comes from trying to understand the mind of another. But most romantic love relationships are S&M emotionally if not physically. You caught me. lol:)
8 Years Ago
yes indeed ..and you are most welcome as the pleasure is all mine ;)
Your poems have a deep feeling in them and they always capture my thoughts to the greatest extent. The way you express yourself is worthy of praise. Extremely beautiful. Keep writing.
i really like all of the oxymoron that you use...that clash of pleasure felt, yet the past pain gives it all a serrated edge---a cold titillation ...letting oneself feel to a point...bu not giving in or letting go completely...yet maybe in the end....the feelings will let go and the emotional will match the physical.
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