Shall I Compare Thee to a Charging Rhino

a big shout out to KL on this one

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Author's Note

a slanted and syncopated rhyme ... at least that is what I am calling it.

captcha murkish ... a critic is born every minute:)

Reviews

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

Your creativity is admirable and commendable. What a great presentation. So full of interesting things. The perfect way to put something new in one's mind. Just excellent. Keep writing.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Vassal. So glad you stopped by:)

[andrew mitchell]

Haha ha lol I enjoyed the cheekiness towards romantic love, the jibe like that of an ex smoker on smokers. Yes romantic love a short journey so much fun but equally so much pain when it's over. I think everyone needs some romantic love sometimes its light sometimes intense, its like a tonic for the body and mind, everything in moderation and it sure feels good for that moment.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Andrew. Not to worry I have not given up on romantic love, just a little wiser that is all:)

[.]

This is interesting work, Pryde.

My first encounter with digitised poetry.....and i sort of struggled to follow the poem, being one who prefers to read and re-read before i review.
I understand your philosophical intent here and it is well written and well worded. The format has just thrown me off a bit, not the words themselves. Something i may need further experience with.
Thanks for introducing me to your style and work.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Doodley. I get you but the great think about this kind of presentation is that you can mute, pause and replay as much as you like:)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so much fun this is....very clever phrasing...and a very tongue-in-cheek humor....sometimes we get to the point where we wonder why anyone would risk loving us.

j.

[Pryde Foltz]

The risk is worth it with a little foreknowledge of self:) Thank you, Jacob:)

[wordman]

no critic here,it was a very creative write

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks Ron. I am glad you enjoyed it:)

[wordman]

i always enjoy walking through your mind pryde.