The Wisp Audio Chapters … VII

The Wisp

Chapter Seven

VII

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZBC6tP1X2JU&list=UU8rAsV8Dot4MbmtGZOA0UlQ

In case you missed the first six chapters. Here they are.

I

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9hbvbISE0s8

II

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DQvVemDLFM4

III

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KDOdN5wrdew

IV

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3IfgSJ5Lz0M&list=UU8rAsV8Dot4MbmtGZOA0UlQ

V

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zo9PGJttDXg&list=UU8rAsV8Dot4MbmtGZOA0UlQ

VI

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=g4YF0dVqdlw&list=UU8rAsV8Dot4MbmtGZOA0UlQ

The Wisp is available at the link below and through your local bookstores and libraries.

Bara dreams of the dark-haired boy, but one blustery day, the dark-haired boy is replaced by a silvery spectre who haunts her even when she is awake, pulling her deeper into dreams and closer to secrets she is better off not knowing. Waking up is no relief. The fictional east-coast town of Windfall offers its own surprises: immortal witches, coffee-loving werewolves, and dream boys come to life. A dead man’s diary names Bara a Clavigen and calls upon her to cage the evil. She must defeat the witch who has ensnared the Wisp in a piece of enchanted amber. Unfortunately the dreams have not revealed all. Always watching, a demon waits to prey upon her young soul.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for sharing your amazing verbal poetry.
Coyote

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[NoelHC]

Another episode, moving the tale along, excellent reading, as usual.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Noel.

[icelandicblue]

Loved the entire chapter. That blackout piqued my interest...

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Icyblue. That comment is actually a spoiler for the books to come. Something to do with Bara's past.

[icelandicblue]

I'll remove it if you want. I know a good author never adds anything that is not important. Obviously you are a good author.

[Pryde Foltz]

Nah … the comment is meant to create speculation for the reader … drawing attention to it heightens the interest:)

[icelandicblue]

Alrighty then, I've added it back in another fashion. ; )

[Troy Henson]

As always Pryde. just a wonderful way to present your work.

Troy

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Troy:)

[Angad Waraich]

A very nice story pryde.
Thank you for sharing.
Keep Writing.
Angad

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Angad:)

[MomzillaNC]

Another good read on your part.

NOTES: I would have liked to hear more about the contents of the diary.
Pasty, at the very end, might be better "plotting" than "planning"

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Mamadi.

To your notes … yes … I think that Bara and Amy would have liked to have learnt more about the diary too … there is method to this madness;) Yes … plotting might work better … if I do a rewrite:)

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome. Waiting for continuing chapters.

[Pryde Foltz]

Very soon ...

[wordman]

well you know i love all your stories

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Ron:)

[jennifer little]

Nice work you did a wonderful job

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Jen.

[Lyn Anderson]

This is really a wonderful story, thank you for sharing.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, KL.

[Lyn Anderson]

I still keep picturing you, on s stage at schools, having kids line up for your autograph. I really think you have something here ...

[Pryde Foltz]

From your pen to God's ears … I hope:)