The Wisp Audio Chapters

The first three chapters of the Wisp on audio … Chapter III posted today. Enjoy.

I

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9hbvbISE0s8

II

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DQvVemDLFM4

III

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KDOdN5wrdew

The Wisp 

Bara dreams of the dark-haired boy, but one blustery day, the dark-haired boy is replaced by a silvery spectre who haunts her even when she is awake, pulling her deeper into dreams and closer to secrets she is better off not knowing. Waking up is no relief. The fictional east-coast town of Windfall offers its own surprises: immortal witches, coffee-loving werewolves, and dream boys come to life. A dead man’s diary names Bara a Clavigen and calls upon her to cage the evil. She must defeat the witch who has ensnared the Wisp in a piece of enchanted amber. Unfortunately the dreams have not revealed all. Always watching, a demon waits to prey upon her young soul.

Reviews

[Jackson H. Harley]

Loved every second :D usually I don't listent to audio readings, not sure why, but this has totally changed that :) the story so far is great, the detail is just the right amount and the dialogue sounds very natural, something I always struggle to achieve, great work :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Jackson. I am glad you enjoyed. Hope you get a chance to listen to all three:)

[Jackson H. Harley]

I'll be sure to :) and you're welcome :)

[C. Rose]

Favorite Bits of Chapter One
-silver and screams
-when the doppleganger says "Hush Hush"
- "It didn't"

I can't tell yet if "she knew him well" is caused be a magical power because she doesn't say his name - or if she really does know him. It is probably the former to some degree. I'm sure chapter two will reveal more.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, CRose.

[wordman]

love your stories pryde always enjoy the read

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks Ron … I hope you will give me a chance to read to you too:)

[wordman]

just say when

[Pryde Foltz]

Now … lol. Click on the links;)

[C. Rose]

Yikes. 2:30ish of chapter one takes drastic a turn from something lurking under the surface to face to face with a nightmare.

I like that Bara's personality is readily shown by her actions of saving the child. So to is the world readily shown just a few minutes into chapter one.

While you take the time to drop hints and build up the scene, you also don't drag.

Well done :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, C Rose.

[C. Rose]

That's so funny. I reviewed this, then went to my read requests to see it in that list. It seems I read you mind :)

[Pryde Foltz]

I think you reviewed upon my posting … I was sending out RR's while you were reading:)