The Wisp Audio Chapters

The first three chapters of the Wisp on audio … Chapter III posted today. Enjoy.

I

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9hbvbISE0s8

II

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DQvVemDLFM4

III

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KDOdN5wrdew

The Wisp 

Bara dreams of the dark-haired boy, but one blustery day, the dark-haired boy is replaced by a silvery spectre who haunts her even when she is awake, pulling her deeper into dreams and closer to secrets she is better off not knowing. Waking up is no relief. The fictional east-coast town of Windfall offers its own surprises: immortal witches, coffee-loving werewolves, and dream boys come to life. A dead man’s diary names Bara a Clavigen and calls upon her to cage the evil. She must defeat the witch who has ensnared the Wisp in a piece of enchanted amber. Unfortunately the dreams have not revealed all. Always watching, a demon waits to prey upon her young soul.

Reviews

[Jackson H. Harley]

Loved every second :D usually I don't listent to audio readings, not sure why, but this has totally changed that :) the story so far is great, the detail is just the right amount and the dialogue sounds very natural, something I always struggle to achieve, great work :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Jackson. I am glad you enjoyed. Hope you get a chance to listen to all three:)

[Jackson H. Harley]

I'll be sure to :) and you're welcome :)

[Matching Socks]

I listened to part one, will circle back for the next two.
Wow Pryde, I am love with your sweet sweet voice.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Ana. So funny to hear you voice ... I always imagined myself a tough talker ... but no ... not even when I try:)

[Matching Socks]

Lol, yeah, it is odd hearing your own recorded voice, but yours is adorable. Truly.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing series of poetry. Even better to be able to hear your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks, John.

[Coyote Poetry]

I added you to my favorite on youtube. Need to add your pretty face and some scenery to make them perfect. Next year. I will post on youtube with my old face and nature.

[Pryde Foltz]

LOL … I will be doing a read soon … in honour of Halloween I will show my face. Mwahahaha:)

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm pretty old and ugly. Your face would give life and reason to your poetry. Always better to see and hear the Poet. I wish there was Poetry reading near. I enjoyed the poetry when I could read to a live audience.

[Pryde Foltz]

Hoping Youtube can sub in more for this kind of thing

[Coyote Poetry]

I hope it will.

[MomzillaNC]

Great story. The audio was a very nice break for my old eyes. :D Keep it coming.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, momzillaNC.

[MomzillaNC]

You're welcome.

[MomzillaNC]

I really wish I had a smart phone or a tablet so I could listen to it in the car.

[Pryde Foltz]

Christmas is coming:)

[MomzillaNC]

:D From your fingers to Santa's eyes!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Hoota Hotta.........and more!

[Pryde Foltz]

Lol … hoota hotta???

[TL Boehm]

so good to see this in print and have the opportunity to hear it too!

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks, Tammy.

[R Smith]

Thank you Pryde this introduction has made me want more, it sounds intriguing will be listening soon :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Richard.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for this, and I will enjoy, and report back later.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks KL:) I appreciate your support.

[kublakhan27]

I am jealous of your creative versatility haha I'm a one-trick pony, with poetry being that one trick...storytelling was never my strong suit...not only are you equally potent in both genres, but you have the voice to apply a whole other dimension to them...reviewing stories is not a strong suit either, but I've listened to the first chapter and you had me gripped from the start...I'll be back for the rest soon...awesome work :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Steve. However I am certain you would excel at whatever form you turned your pen to:)

[C. Rose]

Favorite Bits of Chapter Two
-It wasn't like it was going to be on the test
-Quality over quantity right?
-self congratulatory
- on and on and just possibly on some more
- the tech inclines surfed, the brains ... and near everyone else daydreamed
Realistic and fun to read class room scene.
Was chapter one a flash forward? - Ah it was a dream, I think. Yes definitely a dream. If you can't tell I'm typing as I'm listening.
Realistic dialogue. (The dialogue such as will you come with me to the library (or something along those lines) is plain enough not to distract the reader from pressing forward, but also has enough personality not to be dead space.

You've compared human features to crows twice now. Coincidence of symbolism? :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, C. Rose. Crows are symbolic of many things and very atmospheric. For me crows always seem to be observing and as do our Goths.:)