Internet Love ... audio

Internet Love

 

Audio at https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vMjcf6jDhG0

Reviews

[Woody]

a witty way of writing about what's becoming a reality. the audio definitely added a few laughs.
a wonderful write, Pryde.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Woody.

[Lyn Anderson]

The video with the "whole story" superimposed over it is really a great addition. Real love in the digital age.

[Pryde Foltz]

Things are changing … that is for sure. Thanks KL.

[Gabby Gellerman]

loved it and i thought it was funny about the kardashians I'm not a huge fan either

[Pryde Foltz]

No doubt … right:) Thanks Gabby.

[icelandicblue]

Once there were letters now there is the internet. Who am I to think that it couldn't be real. There are many corporal interludes that wrap themselves in deceit et. al. I wonder which one takes longer to unmask?

[Pryde Foltz]

I think you are on to something:) Thanks Anne:)

[T]

I can see this as being written by one who is naive. And yet, I'm sure this happens quite often at the fingers of those with perfect wisdom and insight as to how it all works. Transitory...what a nice word. You've stuck with a theme and did not veer off from it, only enhanced it with key words. Your profession tone and style are evident. Well done.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Autumn. Yes a tone of naiveté could be read here. The video adds some commentary I think that illuminates the other side of the tale. Take a look if you have the time:)

[T]

Yes, I did forget about that, my bad. I will.

[Pryde Foltz]

I want you to know I visited a couple of your poems and I really liked them. You are a wonderful writer:)

[T]

Thank you.

[NoelHC]

It is possible, and can be so real. Well written.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, NoelHC.

[Butch Decatoria]

Gorgeous writing, enjoyed it emmensely ...

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, PF:)

[willweb]

But what if it is the poetry we fall in love with? Just curious because I fell in love with this one Pryde.

[Pryde Foltz]

Shucks … I suppose that would be alright:) Thank you, Will.

[JayJayBlue]

A great work, I think that with falling in love with someone over the internet, we find ourselves fascinated with a naive ideal. The internet provides us with the chance to re-invent ourselves and over-state our positive attributes.

Keep up the good work

[Pryde Foltz]

So very true. Thank you, JJ:)

[Akshay Rawal]

So the sole purpose is to remain happy even if we live in myth for this . If reality brings us in dismay, we can shun it. Precisely what i think too. Thanks

[Pryde Foltz]

Live in myths … modern science and ancient religions would suggest we already do:) Alas Akshay I have no real answers only observations and points of view. But Ultimately what this poem is about is reserving judgement and allowing people to enjoy their happiness when they have it. Because like all things, but one … this kind of happiness is fleeting