Blue Girls and Sam

A little late for the contest, Rock and Roll, but this one is for you:)

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Looking for the perfect fall reading. Try the Wisp.

Bara dreams of the dark-haired boy, but one blustery day, the dark-haired boy is replaced by a silvery spectre who haunts her even when she is awake, pulling her deeper into dreams and closer to secrets she is better off not knowing. Waking up is no relief. The fictional east-coast town of Windfall offers its own surprises: immortal witches, coffee-loving werewolves, and dream boys come to life. A dead man’s diary names Bara a Clavigen and calls upon her to cage the evil. She must defeat the witch who has ensnared the Wisp in a piece of enchanted amber. Unfortunately the dreams have not revealed all. Always watching, a demon waits to prey upon her young soul.

Author's Note

A morning moon is a visible daytime moon.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is so cool...the bikini would have been interesting...and would have caused quite the stir in the restaurant....wouldn't it?

you are clever...

[Pryde Foltz]

Cheers, Jacob. I thought about adding a stanza where they globe trotted from Bali to Maui … but like with the best bikinis, less can be more:)

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Smilesssssssss:) I loved that Pryde:) yes did lift my mood:)

[Pryde Foltz]

Glad to hear. Thank you, Jonathan.

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:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) Your very welcome Pryde:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Baby Ricochet]

Dr Seuss was a misunderstood genius. Good poem Pryde

[Pryde Foltz]

Yes, but a lousy chef;) Thank you, Baby.

[John Anderson]

This is writing at it's best. Your diction and flow are excellent as is the delivery of your words.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, John.

[Pryde Foltz]

I simply loved this one big Sis, it's full of joy, and so creative! :) I could hear you speaking it...
Dale would love this one, for his contest, sure of it!! well done.

- Elisa

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, sweet stuff. Alas, I started this a couple weeks back and then forgot I had. I missed the contest but I did it for the fun anyways:)

And that's what it's all about... lovely. The fun and pleasure to write... I'm so glad to read you again, sweet or not :D it's all of you! ;) -xx-

[Daydreamer]

Cute and adorably written!

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks, MM.

[escherflight]

Great fun, jaunty and happy. Love the Smurfs, too, though I do think Smurfette is a bit spoiled for choice. Is that why she's gone for Sam?

[Pryde Foltz]

LOL … she is at that. Thank you, escherflight.