Blue Girls and Sam

A little late for the contest, Rock and Roll, but this one is for you:)

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Looking for the perfect fall reading. Try the Wisp.

Bara dreams of the dark-haired boy, but one blustery day, the dark-haired boy is replaced by a silvery spectre who haunts her even when she is awake, pulling her deeper into dreams and closer to secrets she is better off not knowing. Waking up is no relief. The fictional east-coast town of Windfall offers its own surprises: immortal witches, coffee-loving werewolves, and dream boys come to life. A dead man’s diary names Bara a Clavigen and calls upon her to cage the evil. She must defeat the witch who has ensnared the Wisp in a piece of enchanted amber. Unfortunately the dreams have not revealed all. Always watching, a demon waits to prey upon her young soul.

Author's Note

A morning moon is a visible daytime moon.

Reviews

[Ayushi]

Awwhhh... :)))
Such a sweet love story.
Very well done ..

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Ayushi,

[Scott Metro]

Quirky...refreshing...


Scott

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Scott:)

[Michael G. Smith]

You cooked up all here; a smorgasbord of Seuss!

[just Penny]

You certainly cooked up a fine kiddies poem and even let the bigger kiddies share in the fun ! Lovely poetry and a true testament to your talent. Penny

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Penny.

[M.E.Lyle]

OK, this is hilarious. Dr. Seuss would be proud.

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, M.E.

[kublakhan27]

Haha I love the Sam Seuss character...he could be a most-wanted criminal and still sound playful with that namesake...I did catch the 'real Seuss' references though, and I love the revisions you've made in this piece...'their kids were a slight shade of purple'...that line cracked me up...I love how you've fused all those childhood references into a (somewhat) grown-up tale...oh and the rhyme scheme is perfect too :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks Steve.

[Lydia Shutter]

Absolutely delightful! Smurfette, green eggs and ham, and purple babies....a creative blossom of a write! Hey, I want some of that chocolate linguini! Loved it. Lydi**

[Pryde Foltz]

Thanks, Lydi*. With green eggs, chocolate linguini is the only follow-up.

[Avinash]

What a wonderful write my friend. Fairy tale for grown ups . :)

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Avinash.

[Matching Socks]

What a fabulous fun read Pryde!
Loved it. Funny, witty, charming, and romantic.
And if you look deeper it's a good message too, don't judge people by the colour of their skin.

Beauty.
xx

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Ance.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Very nice to read Mr.Sam is too good!

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Skyfall:)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend!