I See, I Feel

An experimentation in form

This poem has moved. Be sure to click on the youtube link below to read and listen:)

Audio at https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p5ZQ39TDGU8

Published in Strays. Available on Amazon

Strays is a collection of two extended narratives and more than forty love-themed poems, exploring the meaning of romantic love while we have it and attempting to find the healing after its loss. Found within these pages is the short story Gutter Dog, the novelette Ginni, and the poems False Skin, the Boy Who Wore Clothes, and the Black-Wit Reveller.

Reviews

[Trace]

very interesting poem.
MUCH enjoyed

Trace

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Trace.

[s y e]

The message portrayed in this poem Pryde is outstanding and you really make a clear, valid point. Another thing, congratulations on your book -- I am so, so happy for you and wish you all the best! Off to buy it now! ;-)

[Pryde Foltz]

That's awesome. Thank you, Noodle.

[Blue]

I can say the experiment is successful, Pryde. The profound message is also commendable. I'm glad to have found your poem in my newsfeed again. ;) Also, congratulations to your book! May you be blessed with a more beautiful writing career ahead.

[Pryde Foltz]

Very kind. Thank you, Blue.

[Rossen]

Breaking through walls of words in stunning opalescence...always moved,

Rossen

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Rossen.

[icelandicblue]

Everything our senses interpret culminate into how we feel. We traverse the world with our emotions.

[Pryde Foltz]

That we do. Thank you, Icyblue.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

even if we don't see, we feel...but often when we see we don't understand, feeling is almost always understanding...at least the pain.

congrats on the book.

jacob

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Jacob.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

To feel can be the bane of ones existence... terrifying if you cannot see...
yet, in this piece you give it fluid motion, something sustainable in the madness...

Brilliant art, Pryde!...

P.S. Congrats on the book!~xoxo~:)

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Robbie.

[Rita L. Sev]

I like the imagery here, and you dis wonderfully with the form. Congrats on the book, Pryde!

[Pryde Foltz]

Thank you, Rita.

[redzone]

Congrats on your book, Pryde. I think you brought the form into the context of the content and made both stand out. You go from pearls and rainbows, to pain, madness and grief.. from seeing to feeling and in a form that wraps tightly around the heart. Amazing work of art you created Pryde. ~~redzone

[Pryde Foltz]

Very kind. Thank you, redone.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

This is a stroke of brilliance, pride. The structure adds so much weight to already affecting imagery. For an experiment, you owned this masterfully.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Sorry, auto-correct changed your name.

[Pryde Foltz]

No worries, I figured. Redzone up above gets called redone, all the time. Thank you, PH>

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

Lol brilliant and funny.