Luce

Cars... and other little things

Memories of warm leather

wooden lush

silent moments together

thunderstorm rolling over just outside

rain drops striking your body

 

Reviews

[Scott H.]

Y'know, I read this as being about something OTHER than cars, but i'm a perv :P Anyway, that just expresses the brilliance of the words and language -- short yet very evocotive.

[Chris Willits]

I love peoms like like this short sweet and memorable. You words are vividly brought to life. W e want to share in the memory. Or at least I do. It sounds like a good memory. I'm not very good at expressing my memories personally. Very good poem.

[Chris Willits]

I love peoms like like this short swet and memorable. You words are vividly brought to life. W e want to share in the memory. Or at least I do. It sounds like a good memory. I'm not very good at expressing my memories personally. Very good poem.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow tender and sweet piece, oh memories can help us feel better during lonely times.

[O!]

U feel most free when driving too?! :-)

nice :-)

x,
O!