Tick-Tock

Tock-Tock, Bells Talk

Tick

Tock

Bells

Talk

 

Empty silence

Warm walls

Big house

Pot hole

And the road comes crashing...

Author's Note

I... eh... I really don't know. Do provide feedback =)

Reviews

[O!]

This is an interesting write coz i dont think we can tell what u were thinking and we can have our own interpretation...and i think that's cool....

Id like to see it this way..a person alone and especially fearful of what step he or she should take....the clock's driving him/her crazy...fear getting worse...but then the step is taken on that road which is so overwhelming....

hmmm...

x,
O!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Interesting piece actually, i get the feel of someone who is awaiting impending doom... short but definatly powerful work.