why

''the chains on being a woman''

I thought the life was mine
But
Why eyes do bound my steps
Why are words stopping my pace?
Why are my steps chained?
Why
O
Why
Why can’t I spread my wings and fly

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Hi, Prritiy... I do understand your sentiments here, being a woman myself. :) Anyway, I just wonder... In the first line, is it really "the life was mine" or you mean just "life was mine". I rarely read "the life" together except in special cases. Thanks. :)

[Prritiy]

Thanks for your keenness, yes i wrote the life on purpose, to show everyone is a master of his/her own life.... but still isn't due to various reasons.

I am thankful for your kind words and loving grace.

[Mahesh Mehta]

Good optimistic thoughts woven in words, words that is yourself amid of what you've been - Keep up the good work !!

[Perkele.7885]

Here in the US., Your life is yours! In some states there are some backwards state laws but, our Federal gov't. is trying to change all that. Men and women as equals
as God said it should be.
.

[SANDEEP SHETTY]

Good work....great feelings conveyed so simply....

[Ency Bearis]

A thought provoking inquisitive poem. Such a profound thoughts that we sometimes asked in order to move on within this world.

[Prritiy]

Ency Sir thankyou for gracing my scribble and kind words.

[Ency Bearis]

You're welcome prritiy. Merry Christmas in advance.

[Prritiy]

Thankyou :) and WISH THE SAME FOR YOU AND YOUR FAMILY n FRIENDS.

[Gaurav Walia]

A very nice thought and perhaps we can apply it to each one of us. We can always INTROSPECT and see what's actually stopping us to take off...

Loved it..

[Prritiy]

Absolutely right Gaurav each one of us has chains to which we are bounded by. Thanks for your visit and thoughtful words :)

[Gaurav Walia]

SURE no problem.. It's always been my pleasure to read your work... Thanks for sharing :D

[Prritiy]

:)..............

[Avinash]

We all are slaves of our own habits unless we break those chains we are unlikely to be what we want to be. Everyone of us is in such condition but it is nicely reflected through your words.

[Prritiy]

Thanks a lot Avinash for your visit and words :)

[Brave girl]

beautiful write, i think i know that you know the answer and it's that lif isn't fair and it doesn't give you what you want, but like Freud said that we do all the things that had been pushd away and held in your heart when we sleep atleast we acheive it in our dreams :) so better go to sleep lol!!

[Prritiy]

yeah you are truly saying dreams bring in what we wish but at times it also shows more of our struggles anyways after some time i will surely hit the bed :)

Thankyou sweets for your loving words.

[Brave girl]

well i guess that nightmares give you this kind of alarm , it gives u an idea of what you aremost afraid of and it's good (for me atleast)...and you sooo welcome dear :)

[Prritiy]

:)>>>>>>>>

[Vani Jalagar]

sometimes I do feel.....there's some strong force that limits my doings. There is something bounding my soul. sometimes my freedom gets hampered even when I'm ought to do good things. something is beyond understanding. but i never went for discovering what it is that strikes me often.
loved it mam:)

[Prritiy]

Thankyou Vani am glad you loved this piece :)

[Cassie]

I also ask so many why's and right now am asking why had I not seen this one. Good one girl

[Prritiy]

aha so sweet Cassie :) how is lil angel doing

Thankyou so much for your precious time.

[Cassie]

She is still waiting to come out, just a few months to go

[Prritiy]

ok :)
take care sweets :)

[Cassie]

Thank you dear. hugs!!!

[Prritiy]

:)........