good morning

Divya the credit goes to you, for after reading your ''bad good morning'' i wanted to show a beautiful morning in India :) especially for you.

 Wonderful Morning

I open my lids to a beautiful morn, slow

Orange chariot rider makes my face glow

Birdie, flapping the air and twittering away

Whites droopy, colored shuddering with gay

 

Drops gathered at night, leaf on me hurls

Dewy fragrant breeze plays with my curls

Butterfly flitting showing off her colorful attire

Cat, for milk, mewing, rubbing, no signs to retire

 

Kids' splashing water add to nature’s music

Peace, on hearing chanting hymns from relic

Rustling of leaves being swept off the road

Clanking of washed out metals when stowed

 

The smiles that from heart to lips rise

Faith rekindled jaunts sparkling the eyes

As I rise filling the blessings of nature borne

Once again I hopefully welcome the new morn.

7.38pm, 15 Aug, 13

 

Reviews

[The dark story]

i loved it. the diction and the rhythm really adorns this write . i liked the way you have painted the vivid imagery and the rhythm in the atmosphere which embraces us early in the morning. its like it rejuvenates our mind and soul resurrect that peaceful ravishing part of the earth. a beautiful poem. thanks for sharing.

[Prritiy]

Thanks a lot Atiba for giving your precious time to read and to give such a beautiful and encouraging comment.

[The dark story]

my pleasure.:)

[Prritiy]

:)>>>>>>>>>>>>

[Cassie]

awwwwwwwwwww....that was a beautiful morning indeed, i loved loved it. As I rise filling the blessings of nature borne Once again I hopefully welcome the new morn. That especially and the first stanza too.

[Prritiy]

so sweet Cassie :) i am glad you liked it so much. Pray it bought peace to you :)
thanks a lot for gracing my words.

[Rhiti Bose]

Well done, another beautiful poem. You are right the Indian mornings are brilliant, one must experience it to know the glory of it.

[Prritiy]

Thanks a lot Rhiti for your kind visit and sweet words. :)

[Sami Khalil]

The morn is magical and you make it splendid with those divine moments and words. I love the sun- shinning through , the trees awakening , the dew on the roses , the sight of birds and geeze even pelicans. Awakening of the world and the souls to a new and better day we hope with health and prosperity...A great write...:)

[Prritiy]

Wow! what beautiful words you have spoken and the words you encouragingly gave for my write are precious.
Am glad you liked it. Thanks a ton.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome a ton...:)

[Prritiy]

:))))))))))))))))))))))

[Sami Khalil]

:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

[Cody Williams]

Beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing!

-CW

[Prritiy]

Thanks lot Cody for your kind and encouraging words.

[Cody Williams]

No problem:)

[Prritiy]

.............. :)

[Avinash]

Sounds like a very beautiful morning of Uttarakhand

[Prritiy]

Avinash its a beautiful morning i weaved for Divya, thankyou so much for your kind words.

[Shivam Murari]

There are many sparkling lines in this poem! Sanity dawns upon us with lid-opening! Nice poem!

[Prritiy]

Wow, Thankyou so much Shivam for your kind visit and sparkling words.

[AYVID N]

Thanks dear friend. I always agree, there are two facets to every coin. I am humbled I could inspire you in such a beautiful way. Kudos for such an awesome work of art!

Keep writing!
:)

[Prritiy]

Thanks Sweets, yes you inspired me to write a hopeful one, for You and for me too :)

[AYVID N]

You are welcome. You have a truly beautiful gift and you must nurture it. You deserve all the praise for this lovely write.

My fav lines:

"Drops gathered at night, leaf on me hurls
Dewy fragrant breeze plays with my curls"

[Prritiy]

i too smiled when i imagined that scene, how lovely it will be :)
thanks a lot dear.

[AYVID N]

Yes it would be lovely indeed. And we should do a collaboration one day soon. It would be fun! Have a great evening with that thought, friend. And keep writing.

[AYVID N]

And thanks again for truly lifting my spirits! :)

[Prritiy]

Sure dear.
You are always welcome :)

[Joyrider]

You painted a nice morning in my mind. Very beautifully written and very well rhymed :)

[Prritiy]

Thanks a lot Shiggy for your kind words.

[Kuandio]

Hi, I got a nice country feeling from this. I found the orange letters kind of distracting, as the picture which was a bit strange. The poem gave me a happy vibe, and it was refreshing to read

[Prritiy]

Thank you so much for your kind visit and constructive review.

The first picture now, is of cloudy morning (i did that on Photoshop) and when one is hopeful the cloudy day is also soothing, in our country we have hot summer :).
I dimmed the orange of letters to golden orange now :)

Once again thanks a lot, glad you liked the write.