I Lose

My body lay there

.

I had crossed

The barriers

.

Space

Time

.

.

With you

to feel you

to hear your words

.

.

the warmth of you

the words honeyed

the voice hypnotic

.

.

warm

sweetened

mesmerized

.

.

Lost

.

.

.

Shudder

.

.

My body awake

.

I lose.

Reviews

[A.A.]

Looking at the other reviews, it seems most people took this to be a dream? Perhaps it's just me, but I first I read this as something rather different, and much darker. Temptation, yielding, something like that? I guess some barriers are more readily crossed than others.

[Prritiy]

You are right its not exactly a dream. it is a mixture of emotions-said unsaid.

I am honored to have your touch to this. Thanks a lot.

[MOON]

Well expressed poignant write of loss and love.

[Prritiy]

Thanks a lot for your wonderful words, am glad you liked it.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The verse just goes down the page... the way you want the reader to clue in on certain areas of the write... and the entirety... of this one...

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much Sir for your kind words and time spared.