How do I Love U
A Poem by
Prritiy
written from a man's side.
or cuddle you in my arms
and let the warmth speak,
and canoe in sparkling water
or invite a long met friend
and leave you to chatter,
or try a hand at your favorite
throw a bash to celebrate your day
or arrange for a visit to your ailing aunt
or catch the longing desire in your eyes
and surprise you with that cherished saree,
holding you should i whisper
sweet nothings in your ear
© 2013 Prritiy
Featured Review
All women wanted to be treated like what you have mentioned above. If I could be a man, I could also do the best that I can to make my woman happy.
But I know that it is just written in a man's point of view, and yet a woman's heart is wishing the same things to be felt by her. :)
This is an ideal poem for an unselfish love...considering things not for himself but to his loved one.
Great!
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
yes i thought what a woman, we want and then wrote it :)
thanks a lot for your precious time a.. read more yes i thought what a woman, we want and then wrote it :)
thanks a lot for your precious time and words.
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I can see the subject of this poem in reflection of heart shaped pic. ..... you just made his day it seems :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
I can see the subject of this poem in reflection of heart shaped pic. ..... you just made his day it seems :)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thanks Avinash :)
You have so many nice ideas for comforting a woman as a male lover.
This may be your own expectations from your lover too.
You have again proved your expertise in painting your poem with the diverse colors of your heart.
Well done,Prritiy.:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
You have so many nice ideas for comforting a woman as a male lover.
This may be your own expectations from your lover too.
You have again proved your expertise in painting your poem with the diverse colors of your heart.
Well done,Prritiy.:)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
O thanks a lot Zainul :), your words mean a lot.
11 Years Ago
You are always welcome,dear friend.:)
11 Years Ago
.............. :)
Wow nice arrengement
says the black guy.
I really love the picture i saw in the view
great job
nicely done
keep it up
Posted 11 Years Ago
Wow nice arrengement
says the black guy.
I really love the picture i saw in the view
great job
nicely done
keep it up
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thankyou so much for your kind words.
wonderfully written beautiful piece to dedicate to ur frnd...this beautiful piece shud b enugh to prove the love u wish to show....fantastic..:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
wonderfully written beautiful piece to dedicate to ur frnd...this beautiful piece shud b enugh to prove the love u wish to show....fantastic..:)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
my heartfelt gratitude for such understanding words :)
11 Years Ago
trust me..my friends are the very reason of my survival...they mean alot to me..:)
11 Years Ago
i am deeply touched and honored with your sweet words.
The character in the poem is expressing is gratitude from receiving affection and asks how to return the favor for being able to bond.
Good Poem
Congratulations, Prritiy.
Posted 11 Years Ago
The character in the poem is expressing is gratitude from receiving affection and asks how to return the favor for being able to bond.
Good Poem
Congratulations, Prritiy.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you so much dear for your sweet and encouraging words :)
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