friendship flourishes

 

free from frauds
fidelity, fertile field
faith feeds feelings
forgets flaws, frictions
frustrations feeble
face flaws firmly
flaunt fervent fondness
forgive fallible, faults
fortitude flees fright
furthers fair fellowship
fences fragile frames
freshened fervor fares
footing, fragile forms
fulfills fancies, frolics
floral flames fruits
friendship flourishes

 5 pm, 17//2012

Reviews

[AYVID N]

A great play of words, all pertaining to friendship. Your creative streak is in full flow here! Great read Prritiy.

[Prritiy]

Thank you so much for your precious time and words Divya :)

[AYVID N]

You are welcome. I really felt strongly about this write. It hurts when friends are insensitive. Thanks again.

[Prritiy]

yes it does :( :)
best wishes

[karan kotabagi]

Great poem on friendship ....your feelings have flourished in your poem!!!

[Prritiy]

thanks a lot.

[Ency Bearis]

It did flourished with the great message.

[Prritiy]

thanks for fantastic comment.

[one sky]

Awesome piece, Prritiy. Very good use of alliteration and assonance. I like this one.
Magnificent!

[Prritiy]

Thanks a lot Margaux :)

[Sami Khalil]

Fabulous , fantastic , flaming good...:)

[Prritiy]

Ahaa what an appreciation, i touched by the kind n flaming words. Thankyou :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...You are welcome...:)

[Prritiy]

.......... :)
and here comes the flap, flap,... batman smile.....

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)...........

[zainul]

Awesome work!
The vocabulary is enriched automatically as one travels from the start to the end of the lovely piece.
Thanks for sharing.

[Prritiy]

I thank you Zainul for being so encouraging and understanding always :)

[zainul]

You are always my lovely friend and we are here to support each other.:)

[Prritiy]

........... :)

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Very well written, every word an image then you wrap it all together, Congratulations.

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much Dear.
Have a nice time.

[Stella Armour]

alliteratively fantastic fun....:o)

[Prritiy]

Thankyou for your kind words.
Have a nice Sunday. :)