fake friendship

feigned fake smile

feeds friendship a while

foretells flimsy life

flowerless feelings rife

1.34am, 17/7/2012

 

 

fib feebles

fades feelings

festers faith

fatal for friendship

1.34pm, 17/7/2012

 

Reviews

[AYVID N]

The one thing I learnt about friendships I learnt is that there is not a nanometer of space for fake in it. The second thing I know about friendships is that they are precious & fragile. So we have to be careful and caring always.

Beautiful words of wisdom on friendship Prritiy.

[Prritiy]

Thanks a lot Divya :)

[AYVID N]

You are welcome Prritiy :)

[anxia]

So truly said in such a beautiful manner.
Words of wisdom.
Unfortunately more often can only realize these wise words too late, that is after experience.

[Prritiy]

You are right :). Thankyou so much for your kind visit and words.

[Anand Sehgal]

feigned fake smile
feeds friendship a while :) so true Prritiy :)

[Prritiy]

thanks a lot :)

[ADITYA (Deep)]

waaaoooo.....creative piece ! a lovely composition of "F" .........of meaningful words!!

[Prritiy]

thanks a lot Adi.

[Ency Bearis]

If this pertains to friendship it's a great concept and you nailed it.

[Prritiy]

Gratitude for kind appreciation.

[zainul]

Feeling very good to see such flawless rhymes
Filled with fiery words to free one from crimes

[Prritiy]

So nice to hear from you Zainul and wah! nice lines you wrote too :)

[zainul]

This is all for you,creative poet.:)

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much :)

[zainul]

You are always welcome.:)

[Prritiy]

....................... :)

[zainul]

You have tricked nicely with dots,colons and parentheses.:)

[Prritiy]

no option left, WritersCafe has left no chance only for :)

[zainul]

They do not know how talented the writers are.:)
How is life now in your city?
I saw paddy plants in your website.
Do you take rice as a staple food?

[Prritiy]

Yeah what we have to say we will find our way :)
Life is ok, rains n mild sun.
Yes, in afternoon food rice is must for us, though personally now it doesn't matter to me be it rice or chapati.

[zainul]

Thanks for the clever response.:)

That's a very happy news.
Do your farmers grow rice as a major crop?
Do you visit countryside?

[Prritiy]

yes rice is grown as one of the major crops as nearly whole of India has rice as staple food. Dehradun has much farmlands around and yes i love greens :)

[zainul]

Nice to learn about your crops and relevant information.
Could you name a movie that reflects the environment of Dehradun and adjoining areas?

[Prritiy]

''Dehraadun Diary'' has been shot extensively in and around Dehradun.

[zainul]

Thanks a lot.
I will find ''Dehraadun Diary'' soon.

[Prritiy]

:) best wishes

[Sami Khalil]

I will add another F in this great poem: Fabulous ( write )

[Prritiy]

O many thanks Sami :)
Ahh your eyes are back :P :)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...You are welcome...:)

[Prritiy]

............ :)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)................

[one sky]

Wow! Though there's sadness in here, I am still amazed of how you put your emotion through assonance and alliteration. Nice choice of words and rhythm.

Grande!

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much, i am touched.
Have a nice time.