I dont cry

You know I don’t cry

Lest my tears disgrace you

Sadness if visible, is not questioned

Blessings sought for you, not guarded

 

I embellish, I adorn

Wear anklet, bangles too

Hiding, the Truth of ascetic heart

Lest you are told, be an ascetic now

 

I chatter with flowers

Fly hither thither like breeze

Learning truth of my stopped steps

No one appeals to you to stop

 

I light the flame with reverence

Bathe, adorn idols, chant couplets

The desolate darkness I am in

He does not fill in your life

 

But when I come to me

With all my shattered hopes

Forgetting all the pretext

I become all yours only

 

Couplets, all forgotten

Lamps, all drown out

I close the doors to breeze

Break alliance with fragrance

 

Tearing away adornment
I let the ascetic heart live

Hiding face in my palms

You know I cry a lot

Author's Note

Originally written in Hindi, rewrote in English when someone wished to have it in English, justice may be not fully done, but the essence will show, I hope.

Reviews

[Annie S]

Very beautiful. The pictures caught my attention which shows what the poem is all about.
My favourite stanza is :

Tearing away adornment
I let the ascetic heart live
Hiding face in my palms
You know I cry a lot
It reminds me of myself. Well given and thank you for sharing :)

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much Annie for taking your time out and gracing my emotions spelt out. Am glad you liked it. :)

[Annie S]

you're welcome :)

[Prritiy]

:) >>>>>>>>>>>>>>

[anxia]

Gosh, This is beautiful. Like everyone else, my favorite stanza is the last stanza. It truly holds the entire essence in it. Awesome poem. Beautifully written.

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much for the beautiful words, i am touched by your graciousness.

[AYVID N]

You brougt a classic touch here. I loved all the verses and the last verse was my favorite. A very touching write Prritiy. Keep writing and we look forward to more such great poetry from you.

[Prritiy]

Thanks a lot Divya, i would be happy if you read its hindi version too if you like too, for i think that was much better.

[AYVID N]

Please send me the the link for the hindi version. Would love to read it.

[Prritiy]

http://prritiy.blogspot.in/2010/02/blog-post_13.html. Its here but i will paste it here for you :)read morehttp://prritiy.blogspot.in/2010/02/blog-post_13.html. Its here but i will paste it here for you :)

[Prritiy]

जानते हो मैं रोती नहीं
मेरे आंसू तुम्हे रुसवा ना करे कहीं
पूछ ना बैठे कोई, देख उदास मेरा चेहरा
तेरे लिए की दुआओं पर, ना लगे पहरा

मैं सजती-संवरती भी हूँ
पायल, चूड़ी पहनती भी हूँ
जाने ना सच मनजोगन का
कहे ना तू भी रह अब जोगी सा

फूलों संग बातें भी करती हूँ
हवा सी उड़ती फिरती हूँ
जान मेरे रुके क़दमों की सच्चाई
दे ना कोई तुझे रुकने की दुहाई

दिए की बाती में श्रद्धा लौ भरती हूँ'
अभिषेक, तिलक, कर श्लोक पढ़ती हूँ
डूबी हूँ मैं जिस सूने अंधकार में
भर ना दे वो कहीं तेरे संसार में


पर जब आती हूँ अपने पास
लिए बिखरी हुई टूटी आस
सारे छद्मों को फिर मैं भूलकर
हो जाती हूँ बस तेरी होकर

श्लोक सारे भूल जाती हूँ
दीप सारे बुझा देती हूँ
हवा पर द्वार बंद कर देती हूँ
खुश्बुओं से नाता तोड़ देती हूँ

मन जोगन को जीने देती हूँ
श्रृंगार सब नोच लेती हूँ
चेहरा हाथों में छिपा लेती हूँ
जानते हो मैं बहुत रोती हूँ

[AYVID N]

Awesome work Prritiy. The font is a bit unclear, yet I can see the poem is stunning. Is poem ki asli beauty, spirit aur appeal original Hindi Version mein hain, though you have been kind enough to translate it into English for the benefit of those who don't know Hindi. I would request you re-post the Hindi version with the Hindi font clearer. I'd like to hare it with my Dad, who is a true Hindi Literati. Wanna tell him there's mind-boggling literary potential in the new generation of poets!

[AYVID N]

Oops! I see there is an html link! I'll read it there. Thanks Prritiy! :)

[AYVID N]

Lovely Blog. Count me a regular visitor. And you have a fan! :)

[Prritiy]

Loads of thanks to you dear, this is one of my writes in which i feel i did well, rather it has my heart, soul and pain in it and yes that was written originally in Hindi and a friend asked to do it in English to understand it clearly, so i wrote it.

I see you have seen it in my blog so i guess you don't need me to repost it.

Give my respectful regards to your Dad.

And :) Take Care Divya, hugs to you.

[AYVID N]

Thanks Prritiy!

[Prritiy]

:) :) :) :)

[Leonard Birch]

A wonderful write Prritiy. A moving piece.
Thank you
Leo

[Prritiy]

Am graced by your precious words, thanks a lot.

[Cassie]

Nicely penned, I enjoyed reading

[Prritiy]

Thanks a lot Cassie for sparing your precious time and kind words.

[ADITYA (Deep)]

lovely piece of writing !!
It has the blend of simplicity, a strong aura of emotion, it expresses a sense of hope and flexibility too....

[Prritiy]

Thankyou Adi for the encouraging words.
Did you read the hindi version?

[ADITYA (Deep)]

Yes, I read the Hindi version, it's amazing !!

I have added a piece ("Writing")..........just to honour each writer who are an artist by his/her own.............. so I must say ~ Truly.....u r a born artist !!

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much Adi.
I have read a few of your pieces including ''writing'', like the way you express your thoughts, writer friend :)

[ADITYA (Deep)]

Thanks..........& Cheers my friend !!

[Ency Bearis]

A moving poem and unique write.

[Prritiy]

Thanks a lot for your wonderful words.

[Gaurav Walia]

WOW!! It moved me... very well rewritten...

My Fav. Part :

I embellish, I adorn
Wear anklet, bangles too
Hiding, the Truth of ascetic heart
Lest you are told, be an ascetic now

I chatter with flowers
Fly hither thither like breeze
Learning truth of my stopped steps
No one appeals to you to stop

kinda gave me a picture of what's happening...

[Prritiy]

Thank you Gaurav for the kind words.
You went through the Hindi one?

[Gaurav Walia]

where is it ?

[Prritiy]

sorry went a bit away so didn't read your question on time.
am glad you found it :)

[Avinash]

Celebrating inner sadness into something beautiful is the achievement of this poem.

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much Avinash for you kind review.

[one sky]

Beautiful! I like your concept...hiding one's weakness. Pretending that you are not crying but actually you are.

Who woudn't cry if being hurt? if being left alone in the dark? It is our nature to have this defense mechanism, to reveal our strength and conceal our weakness.

"Tearing away adornment
I let the ascetic heart live
Hiding face in my palms
You know I cry a lot"

Astounding piece.

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much Margaux for your kind words, its inspires a lot :)

[one sky]

You are very much welcome, Prritiy.

[Prritiy]

:).........