pearls

clouds over moon
ah shimmering pearls
locks hiding

~ Prritiy

Reviews

[Nkosana B Masuku]

what a shining short poem.Quite felt the shimmer there and great image to encapsulate it with.

[Prritiy]

Thanks a lot.

[Lily Finch]

short but so beautiful :)

[Prritiy]

Thank you Lily :)

[zainul]

Wonderful imagery and reality together.
I am looking out to the sky now to see such a lovely scene.
Congratulations,dear friend:)

[Prritiy]

I am glad you looking at sky to see the moon playing hide n seek along with clouds :) thank you for your wonderful encouraging sentiments :)

[zainul]

Oh,so nice of you for offering me a lovely moment of thought on natural beauty :)

[Prritiy]

you are always welcome :)

[zainul]

:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

I like it...:)

[Prritiy]

Thank you Sami am happy you liked it.

[Sami Khalil]

I did. My pleasure...:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[Prritiy]

i knew it was coming :)

[Sami Khalil]

Hahaha...:)

[Prritiy]

:) keep laughing.....

[Ency Bearis]

Short poem in simile - the moon like a pearl - seems a haiku but not conformed with the 5/7/5 syllable of Japanese format. Modern haiku can be.

[Prritiy]

thankyou, this is not haiku, just a reply to lines someone wrote :)

[Ency Bearis]

I see : )