a mom born!

my first attempt at haiku

white womb
fruits, my lady
a fairy angel!

~ Prritiy

Reviews

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Beautiful image I see in your haiku. Splendid! Namaste.

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much. i am touched by your gesture.

Namaste.

[Vikrantsingh]

Wow amazing from womb to angel nice journey. I loved it :)

Simple and decent way Nice haiku to your mom :)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Prritiy]

Thank you so much for your kind words.

[Vikrantsingh]

You're Welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

A good one...:)

[Prritiy]

Many thanks Sami. Have a nice day.

[Sami Khalil]

You too kind lady...:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[writ rajat]

nice thought

[Prritiy]

thank you :)

[zainul]

Nice effort,Prritiy.

[Prritiy]

So kind of you Zainul, thank you :)

[zainul]

I can imagine the cry of the kid that makes the mom smile.
Very lively piece :)

[Prritiy]

:) she is my mom with my elder bro, her first baby :)

[Ency Bearis]

simple but remarkable, nice notion

[Prritiy]

Thankyou so much Sir Ency :)

[Leslie Philibert]

and a good short poem, with strong imagery !

[Prritiy]

Thank you Sir :)