phantom pain

O! that sharp pain pierced once again
This time at different place.

It is gnawing again
There’s no remedy
No pill, nothing to ease it.

Still it feels nice also
Try to stay still, no movement
To let the sensation stay in.

Pain though brings helplessness
It gives the feel how it was
Before it became a stump
The pain, the phantom pain.

Reviews

[Zoe Marie Ross]

I like this, we all have different emotions, at different levels, which affects how each individual reacts to a situation, one person could feel broken, whilst someone else could ignore the emotions and act as if they are unaffected. Or sometimes, we can even choose what we want to feel, but it comes back to haunt you, eventually. Well done!

[Prritiy]

Absolutely right Zoe Marie every one reacts differently to same situation. Thankyou so much for the insightful remark.

[Sami Khalil]

There is no phantom that this is a beautigul read and write...Well done...:)

[Prritiy]

Thankyou kind Sir for your lovely review, am touched :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Sami Khalil]

^^~^^ :)

[AlexValkyrie]

That was really well written. I hope that the writing of this work helped you achieve a level of closure or healing. Good job. :)

[Prritiy]

thankyou so much for thoughtful consideration.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Pain is always a part of our lives. We have to feel it, and strive to survive from it.
Without the pain, we can never realize how to be happy...because only with pain we distinguish sadness from happiness. Pain is a test, and after passing it, you'll surely get the gift of strength.
Nice poem. :)

[Prritiy]

Dhaye thankyou for appreciation and your valuable comment. :)

[Ency Bearis]

great scribe in different aspect in pain, a brilliant thoughts and poetized

[Prritiy]

thankyou Ency, am glad you like it :)

[Ency Bearis]

you're welcome

[Prritiy]

:)

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

This is beautiful, I am sure a lot of people have this trouble, this was well written my friend great job.

[Prritiy]

Thanks from deep down my heart. :)

[Ayvid N]

A very nice description of pain Prritiy. Indeed, phantom pain is a reminder we carry all our lives and so true that it's a pain we sometimes just enjoy 'coz it becomes a part of us. A brilliant thought. Thanks for the great read.

[Prritiy]

Heartfelt thanks Divya. You are right sometime we enjoy in pain too :)

[zainul]

Pain is intolerable.
One has to bear its bite individually.
Nicely penned.

[Prritiy]

You are right Zainul, one has bear one's pain individually.
Thank you so much for always encouraging with your wise words :)

[zainul]

We are now friends to support each other.
You are also equally supportive to my emotion.
Thanks for the kind gesture :)

[Prritiy]

Its an honor and pleasure to be your friend. :)

[zainul]

:)

[Prritiy]

:)

[Matthew Kult]

Hello Prritiy

Wishfully neurotic like waking from a dream of a past lover you could never share an emotional experience with again.

Always,

Matthew
A.

[Prritiy]

yes you are right Matthew its just like reliving the past love in mind :).

Thank you for your insightful words.