but hear Human

but hear Human

A Poem by Prritiy
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Inspiration from Ant, A Poem by zainul- http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/zainul/1161342/

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we had built anthills
yonder in the forests
had food enough to stomach
still left so much also for others
you destroyed our homes
to build your silly mansions
our source of food you ate
ate less and plundered more
now tell where we go
ah you cant tell
so here we come
still only take what we need
keep all, no we have no greed
so why do you complain
don't kill, let us live
for 'You' live if we live
hear O human

© 2013 Prritiy


Author's Note

Prritiy
This can be treated as general lament of every living being n other natural resources.

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An inspired poem and inspiring too. Well done and enjoyable to read...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

I did . You are welcome...:)
Prritiy

11 Years Ago

:)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)
this is reallllllllly lovely..!!!
i could feel the pain of the ants..!!
very beautifully expressed..!!
well done..!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

11 Years Ago

Thankyou Saumya for the appreciation.
Saumya

11 Years Ago

you are highly welcomed..!!! :)
Prritiy

11 Years Ago

:)
Very well written. I loved it. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

11 Years Ago

Many thanks to you Alex.
World views and nature... we tend to humanize - perhaps that is part of the problem as well?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Prritiy

11 Years Ago

Yes Chris too much of everything is not too good, being too selfless too :)
I decided to specially congratulate you for the graphical work done for your poem citing my name.This is awesome.
Would you please tell me how did you make it?
I appreciate your wonderful graphic art,talented friend.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

11 Years Ago

I did that in photoshop, i love pictures but am poor at drawing so this way try to compensate my urg.. read more
You have advocated for the ant community and other living entities with eloquence.
I am overwhelmed by the beauty of your amazing piece.

I adore your incomparable compliments for me.
I am very grateful for your favor.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

Well,I accept your precious gift.
I feel very blessed ad honored :)
Prritiy

11 Years Ago

:)
zainul

11 Years Ago

:)

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Added on April 23, 2013
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Tags: ant, anthills, forests, food, need, greed

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Prritiy
Prritiy

India



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