My Love!

My Love!

A Poem by Prritiy
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written for valentine week contest after summoning love in my heart for my friends and then visualizing it for someone special.

"
I don't say, I will die for you
But, I will say, I will live
To at least bring, a smile to your lips.

I may sometimes, forget things
But, everything of you, for you and
By you, will be a thing of great concern.

I am liable to be impatient at times
But, will always try to
Hear you, with all the patience.

I don't say, for you, I will bring stars from the sky
But, will try
To brighten your life, with cheers.

I can't say, life will always bring happiness
But, promise to be there, to dry your tears,
Help you, hold you in arms and to share.

I may not proclaim my love, over and over again
But my smile, concern, patience, cheers
And sharing, will tell you subtly, that
I always care for you.

© 2013 Prritiy


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Very soothing and heartening message,my dear poet.
Each word of the piece is a flower emitting fragrance of love.
I can feel your lively and natural gesture of assurance from the beginning to the end of the golden piece.
I have chosen this stanza as my favorite:
" I may not proclaim my love, over and over again
But my smile, concern, patience, cheers
And sharing, will tell you subtly, that
I always care for you."



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome,lovely friend :)
You deserve all credit and recognition.
You are re.. read more
Prritiy

11 Years Ago

:)
zainul

11 Years Ago

:)



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There was some much underline emotion in this, and it came through like a charging Rhino. I enjoyed this and hope to read more.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

how lovely.. a very tender and caring poem you have penned here..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

11 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Stella, sorry it escaped me.
Best Wishes
This has a pledge in a sense... as a reader keeps pulled in by the vindication...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

11 Years Ago

Thankyou Glen for giving your precious time. :)
nice piece...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Prritiy

11 Years Ago

Thankyou :)
A very nice poem. I like it a lot...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Prritiy

11 Years Ago

:)
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

^^~^^ :)
Lovely write and heartfelt message.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Prritiy

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your lovely words.
Very soothing and heartening message,my dear poet.
Each word of the piece is a flower emitting fragrance of love.
I can feel your lively and natural gesture of assurance from the beginning to the end of the golden piece.
I have chosen this stanza as my favorite:
" I may not proclaim my love, over and over again
But my smile, concern, patience, cheers
And sharing, will tell you subtly, that
I always care for you."



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome,lovely friend :)
You deserve all credit and recognition.
You are re.. read more
Prritiy

11 Years Ago

:)
zainul

11 Years Ago

:)

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