Journal entry #4

Another one for a set.

Hidden chambers of remains,

Nothing to be seen,

blacked out rooms the dark has claimed,

Trying to redeem.

Claiming corners and crooked spaces,

Snatching every part,

Of my mind of hidden traces,

My sanity and pure heart.

Author's Note

Comment anything that needs to be changed

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

wow very inspiring

sometimes life can be a bit draining
and the enemy will keep pulling us down.


Sounds like what I went through last
night I was in tears and crying thankfully
I stopped I am way too Tenderhearted
and care way too much and not been feeling
good bad sinus Headaches due to this weather
and rain and they're painful headaches
but got something for it
the crying helped me sleep though.




Thank you for sharing something
so personal this was a powerful piece
and thank you for stopping by my page.


God bless. Benita

[Pushkar Prabhat]

nothing needs change............its perfect!!
beautifully put!!
i loved it!!!
:)