The Perfect Woman

You are to me the perfect woman

Seduced from rock since ages gone

Your laughing eyes like silk in the dark

Echoing the sparrows’ splendor in spring

While your smile drips pearly rows of grace.

I graze the mountain slopes moist from the dew

Of midnight trysts with your embrace

And like a cold glass in the heat of summer,

I am cloaked in the womb of your embrace.

 

My soul has never seen the light of day

Till I first laid eyes on you and behold

My heart is pierced with your radiance

And a thousand points of light cascade

From my breast in a thousand, thousand rays.

Your beauty so radiant the mighty sun

Turns the earth brown in blinding rage

And the dainty moon so filled with shame

Sheds pearly tears of crystal peace.

 

Reviews

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Whomever this lovely lady is, she's very lucky to have such a romantic piece written about her :) I love the imagery you portrayed here. You capture descriptive words in such a magical way. Beautiful work.

[BEEGE]

Good job!
The line, "The mighty sun turns the Earth brown in blinding rage"
Is my favorite line of the poem and was amazing!
Nice.