Poo and Nonsense

It seems like love and Ire

Run parallel in me

like blood and pee

One moment, I feel such love

And the next, I want to

Slap the living daylights

out of their whiny a*s

Then you wonder

Do you really love them?

And if you did, how could

You wish they were a

A fat rubber ball you

Could happily kick round

Bounce them off to space

Or a big, podgy cheek

You could wickedly pinch

Without a bit of guilt

All the while never believing

People you love can smell

So much like cat droppings

In the thick of morning

Full of poo and nonsense!

Author's Note

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

Love and hate, and the reason why we kill our other halves, and why the courts understand the insanity of it all. Okay, maybe the court didn't understand the demise of the poor girl as the steamroller went over her, or the reasoning that the world cup really was at the exciting part, and she wanted to go shopping.
Seems as clear as mud to me. Go shopping, what is wrong with women, kitty.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Thank you for sharing your views, dear Paul! 👋😺

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Though your poems leave me with questions, it fills me with admiration in how you talk about love in such a never thought of way, and yet it all comes out as nice poetry that inclined me to read one poem after another. I don't have a review for one particular poem of yours, just of you as an amazing writer. Keep up the good work.

[Diane]

I have to agree with all the other commenters. Love, hate, and moods. The wording was awesome.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Thank you Diane. :)

[Lia Columbus]

Ah... We know all about our mood swings. We give our lovers such a hard time :) it's a sassy piece. I like it.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Thank you very very much Lia!

[Dripping Chocolate Madn..]

It's only natural :)
Coffee helps, I find. Also chocolate.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

I get high on both :) thanks

[Inessa]

Lol. Hilarious. Quite a feisty write, this one! We all have our days of feeling this way. I know i am no different. Some days we just need to get the claws out and swipe away. Sometimes it is even deserved, too. You are true feline by nature!

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Thank you so much dear friend. Meow! :)

[Ralph Proenza (Docralph..]

I does seem Love and Hate dance a very THIN line. Funny how some people elicit one or the other, and do it so quickly. I enjoyed this piece...it brought a smile to my face, Dhara. _Ralph

[Lydia Shutter]

Oh my! I am pleased I do not live in your home! I guess you are not a morning person! An honest and emotional write. Lydi**

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Thank you so much dear Lydi ❤

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha .."like blood and pee" ..absolutely brilliant says i! ... so relatable Ditzy .. so real ... we are a mix .. a all do have certain ......odor .......... ;} your poem makes me think of love .. and that it is neither of those extremes .. but its what says ... ok ... not perfect ... neither am i .. i am staying ;) as crazy as this may sound .. i think this would be a perfect valentine's poem :)))))))))))))))))
E.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Thank many times over dear friend. Sorry for the delayed response. I haven't been here lately as most of my close friends have left the Cafe. I missed you!

[Einstein Noodle]

ohhhh i'm sorry to hear that Kat ... but you have a lot still around ... right here at the Cafe' ;)

[barleygirl]

I relate to this so much! I'm a rapid-cycling bipolar, so I can love & hate in the same breath! If only I could express myself this creatively & with such delicious PUNCH! As you've expressed the central reason why I live alone in the boondocks at almost 64. I've had it with that messy litter box slinging, down there in the real world! *wink! wink!* You inspire me to do better, be more zany & light, when I express my negativity! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Thank you so much my dear friend. Sorry for the delayed response. Havent been here for a pretty long time. I missed you!