The Static In Me

sensual

I will punch a hole in your universe

Let you leak all over the firmament

Till devoid of fight, devoid of blood

In a shadow, you begin to recede

Then I'll rush to fill your breathless void

With my charged, blustery blue ocean

Still and static till now, waiting  

For the rippling and trickling to begin

 

Reviews

[LazerRays]

wow this was intense! you know those action movies that get your adrenaline pumping because you never know whats gonna happen next? this was fast paced and equally exciting. you had me staring at the screen right until the end; great work on this Dhara!

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Hahaha
I’m trying to be kind and cruel to my victim, at the same time. Glad you liked it Sarah. It encourages me to write more.

[LazerRays]

of course :)

[Einstein Noodle]

brings images of the tides and ocean motion in moonlight ... she is a Vampira ...like a coiled spring or cobra ...titillating, inspiring poem Kitty Kat!
E.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

My boyfriend was arguing with me and I wanted him to shut up but not in a bad way. So I wrote this down and gave it to him. He was a mouse after that! A sweet and gorgeous one. Thank you, dear E!

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha that is so funny Ditzy! sounds like you have him just where you want him ;) poor boy! he's a gonner me thinks :)))))))))))))

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

A bit of humour goes a long way in ironing out little snitches, E ;)

[Einstein Noodle]

yes it does .. rue the day a humorless partner enters ones life ;)

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Oh yes! I’ve seen it first hand! A mismatch can be hell 😺

[Einstein Noodle]

:) ..............

[Neville]

Now just a word of caution here my feline friend.. I hope you took precautions.. staggeringly sensual, if not erogenously erotic and filled to overflowing with tantalizingly naughty metaphor, but then.. what are metaphor for eh'.. I am overcome.... N

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

I love metaphors too N! And words! There’s a book on Word Power I’m reading by Norman Lewis. I’m totally into this affair. It will last long after I’ve turned into a bony, rheumy old cat! 😺 Thank you my dear friend! 💕

[Neville]

good to hear...

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Thanks :))))(

[Planet x]

I love your poem
For some reason my heart started to run faster with every word , it must be a powerful effect , pretty rare

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

I tried my hand at metaphors here rather than straight lovemaking. Glad you liked it. :)

[Planet x]

you must did it really good :)

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Thank you! I'm so happy now.