Sugary Rats & Bats

A weird thing is love

Its prongs piercing

The murkiest of hearts

Sly as a weasel’s fart

Bamboozling truth

In peppered lanes

In the most cunning

Hardwired brains

Making hardcore felons

Love struck rats

Sing in icky, sugared pain

A weird thing is love  

Making men out of trolls

Trolls out of men   

For the love of witches

Slyly posing as women

Caustic below.....

Candy above......

Brooms tucked in hems

A weird thing is love

Author's Note

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

LOL I have a pair of those spectacles... you know, the rosy ones:/ the problem is i cant see very well without spectacles so i rarely take them off. Now you might be thinking Bunny why don't you just change your prescription? And my response generally is I love to see the beauty in everything, even if i get hit over the head with the occasional broomstick:)

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Thank you dear Bunny :) Watch that broomstick though ;)

[barleygirl]

You're singing my tune here! It's been decades since I pursued love & these are all the reasons why! People just never turn out to be what they act like (brilliant line: "caustic below & candy above"! -- and so many more!) I believe that the more a person wants/craves/pursues love, the more prone he/she is to all these traps. I believe there's a ton of love to be reaped from this world, but it just doesn't look like what these love-craving others seem to be in the market for! Love your slightly-stinging rebuke, along with your uninhibited slamdunk descriptions! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Wowza! I'm super happy happy now dear Margie! Love you for these words!! Theres plenty of love in this world but it just doesn't look like what these selfish people are in the market for! Many purring thank yous for the great reinforcement, my awesome friend! A BIG BIG HUG!

[AJNJ]

I don't know the who or what of this but I enjoyed this naughty piece, Ms. DitzyKat. Your claws are as cute as you.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

My tiny claws and furry paws
are as funny and smart as your hee-haws.
ThankMeow!

[AJNJ]

I can vouch for it. You're welcome Ms. Kat. :)

[Dave Brown]

an enjoyable reference to that wonderful occasion and the super cute little kitty cat video'd is just toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.
Even my puppy would approve!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Hahaha kitty loves appreciation 💕 Meow!

[VALORMORE DE PLUME]

Love has many interpretations. Those you touch upon, form a well rounded and entertaining concept for the reader to consider. Well done Dhara

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Thank you very much for reviewing this writing so kindly. I am encouraged.

[Jayne sumner]

I really love ur twisted and awkwardly witty use of words and metaphoric descriptions..."it can bamboozle reality in the most hard wired brain"...it's brilliant...

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Thank you very much Jane. It makes me happy I could convey a bit of the desired effect :)

[Chris Shaw]

Well they do say that love can move mountains. I certainly believe it is all powerful. It can be strange indeed the way it works. You convey its power well in your lines. Dhara.

Chris

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Thank you very much for the kind review.

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome :)