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[color=violet] Chapter 1

        Dogs barking. Soft music playing. The click of the keyboard keys. Its just that I thought that i'll never get away. Hikaru rolls over in his bed this makes no sense to me at all. He sighs sitting up slowly, about half way up his ears start to tune in to the darkness. There is faint yelling, then a loud noise. Smashing glass. This did'nt surprise Hikaru, sitting up all the way he looked, his sister was on her computer. "What are you doing still up Nami?" Hikaru said while rubbing his eyes his voice low. Nami only shrugged, hearing him but not paying much attention to his words. A still sleepy Hikaru rummaged threw his closet to find somethng to wear, he heard Nami shut down the computer. "You really need to get some rest during the nights." "I get enough sleep at school don't I?" Nami grabbed a hair bow,a purple brush and walked away into the bathroom. Shes so snotty she gets on my nerves.Thought Hikaru.
        He got undressed and put on some kaki pants, a black t-shirt, putting a baggy grey hoodie over it he put on his socks and shoes. Nami walked out of the bathroom she was wearing her normal school uniform, but in a differnet style then most girls should wear it. "So, Hikaru how do I look" Nami gave out a small giggle then flipped her blonde hair -which was in a high ponytail- behind her shoulder. Hikaru did'nt even bother to look as he was packing his books in his bookbag. "You look like a s**t." he said zipping up his bookbag slinging it over his shoulder "..as always" Hikaru sighed under his words. Nami smirked and before she left the room she ruffled Hikaru's hair. Not like it mattered or anything. He walked out of the room steping into a brighter light than before,even louder yelling, more smashing of glass. Nami's father kissed her cheek and smacked her butt "Have a good day at school pumpkin" he said giving a perv-ish smirk.
"You know it would be better if you were'nt such a man-w***e" Hikaru glared at him, then was out the door.         
        Later during language arts Hikaru was sitting in his normal seat near the window. In every class he was seated by the window. "So Hikaru...." Kisori smiled slightly blushing "Do you wanna sit near me at lunch today" Kisori batted her eyelashes abit ".........No" Hikaru was looking out the window. "Oh please Hikaru" "I said no." he turned to look at her "And I also suggest you find someone else to like, becuase I will never like you" he thought what he said was abit cold,he wanted to turn around and apoligize but it was the truth, plus she was so annoying. How could anyone stand her? Hikaru was'nt interested in girls anyway, they were either to annoying, snotty, weird or a w***e. There was only one girl the he liked, she sat out side on the bench to read for hours. The bench was placed in just the right spot to, It was at an angle to where only he could see her nobody else knew why he looked out the window so much. They would always ask 'Whatcha looking at' or 'Why do you look out the window so much?' It was because of her. Her long black hair, those eyes that glinsened in the sunlight. He was really falling for her, he just never showed it. Then interupting him was his 'click' his small group of friends he hung out with all the time. "So are we goning to the skate park today or what?" that was Yraku. He always thought he was the best of the click, but thats when Hikaru showed them what he was all about. They never want to go anywhere except for the skate park to watch Hikaru skateboard. He was quiet before he answered ".........What for?" Hikaru asked Yraku looking at him out of the corner of his eye. "You know, we wanna see if you came up with any new tricks thats all." "Alright. Then we'll go, but..." "But what?" "But you gotta stay out of my way" Hikaru was slightly glaring at them now. "That cool with us" he looked back behind his shoulder "right guys?" They nodded


Chapter 2

        Kler-chink! The sound of hard plastic hitting concrete, then there was a soft cruising sound that skidded to a halt. Skate-boarding. The most enojoyable sport next to nothing other then bordum. Hikaru was laying down on his skate-board looking at the blue sky. He watched the clouds as they morphed into animals,poeple, any thing you name it. Everybody would have some sort of drinks and be sitting down with there skate-boards laughing and having a great time. Hikaru also enjoyed the skate-park. It's the only time he would ever feel joy. Feel free.
        There was a skater riding past Hikaru. He noticed that is was a girl by the shoes that she wore. Sitting up his eyes widened. It was her the girl that would read on the bench. Getting up Hikaru got on his board and went down the half pipe infront of him, he was trying to keep up pace with her. Every body was watching them, nobody had seen any thing like this before. He narrowed his eyes at the egde of her skate-board reading the name off of it. Anshiko. That was her name. Hikaru looked up at her, she glanced back down at him. Anshiko grabbed a small circle pipe and turned around. Hikaru did the same but with the egde of the wall, skating on it he turned around aswell. "Why are you following me?!" shouted Anshiko. "Because I need to talk to you!" Hikaru shouted back. "Well I don't want to talk to you!" Anshiko sped up. "Well thats to bad! 'Cause I don't take no for an answer!" Hikaru jumped off his skate-board tuking it under his arm, he ran. He threw his skate-board getting it jammed under Anshiko's wheels. Losing her balance, Anshiko fell. Hikaru got there just in time to catch her. She was staring at him her eyes wide, he smiled. "Told you that I don't take no as an answer."
        "So what did you want to talk to me about" Anshiko bit a chunk off some dango. "Well you see, I know you, from school" He glanced over at her, then picked up an origuri piece and bite off of it. "Really now?" Anshiko took a sip of her tea. "Yeah" "What about it?" "Its just that I...." Hikaru's cheeks had gathered a pink-ish tint to them. Anshiko raised an eyebrow looking at him. "You...." "I just kinda, well you know. I feel that feeling your supposed to feel about some body else" Hikaru was looking at his shoes kinda swinging them back and forth, the heels of his shoes tapping against the concrete wall. "Your that boy who is always staring at me?" Hikaru nodded not looking away from where he had placed his eyes. Anshiko munched down the rest of her food "so whens your birth-day?" "Three days from now" "Will you be here the day after tommorow?" "Yeah wh-" "-Well I gotta go" Hikaru watched as a van pulled up "Well see ya" Anshiko had was already half way to the unmoving vehical when he looked up. He watched as she got inside the van,It's motor made a sound then started to move. Moving passed him slowly, he seen her waving, he had to sheild his eyes as the metal seemed to shine a flash light at him in the middle of the day. Hikaru waved back, and watch her leave. "Oh well...........Hey guys come on I getta get home early enough for supper!" It's not like his parents cooked it anyway, he was the one who took care of the house, payed his stupid familes bills. And how did he do that. He got a job. Yes. A job. As a cook. He would also do fund raisers just so he could get money. Saving every penny he got till taxes came. He would never tell his family when it came, they needed it, he would spend on his on will, if he wanted to that is. The only thing that keeps his family together is him, it seems that he's the adult and he's baby-sitting a bunch of whiney childeren. Hikaru was already riding on his skate-board, he did'nt even notice that he was not even a quarter of a mile to his house. Stopping five minutes away from his house, Hikaru got on hsi skate-board and walked the rest of the way. He expected to see that small white boxey car of their's in the yard, but to Hikaru's surprise it was'nt there.

Author's Note

i need a title, since i have'nt titled it yet

Reviews

[Emily Elizabeth]

Nice story, but you should work more on the punctuation and the sequencing. However, for a story in it's rough and early stages, it's very promising and I liked the imagery at the beginning! Well done!

That was a nice read. I can't wait to read more! Keep it up! And welcome to writerscafe!