Know Who You Are

 

Know Who You Are:

by United Writings   

What is knowing who you are

When you know everything about you

Your bio, your name

No its looking through other individuals Eyes

 

When you look through different eyes besides your own

You will realize that every thing is different in someone else’s

Views who am I and who are you and what is this place you

People call life

 

Knowing who you are

Do I know who I am

Did I look through other individuals eyes

Yes but the question is do you

Reviews

[Erin Phoenix]

I feel like this sometimes. You really don't know who you are until it is your time to leave... even then your very lucky if you do get the gift of ... well you.

Hope to read more of your work. '

Keep me posted.

Don't be shy to ask for help!

:)

[Nana Carmine]

Sometimes I think it's the hardest to figure out who you are. it is still a mystery to me as I go on. But I figure it more and more each day. Thank you for sharing this poem with us- I really think you did a wonderful job with the message and the flow. i really like your style so please write on.

~Nana Carmine

[Amanda]

well written and very insightful.

i like the idea of what you are trying to convey here. one can never know what another's thoughts are. how others perceive you is the truer form of who you really are. what you think of youself along with what others see is the definition of who you really are.

Amanda

[jen -- JG]

Sound idea flow here, questions and answers and the master question - how can anyone else know who we are if we don't really know ourselves?

Walking in another's shoes can give an idea of what other people are like and how they feel.

Look at yourself through another person's eyes is an excellent -

A sound poem here PromiseKeeper.

The only thing I would suggest is pehaps to think about punctuation - it would help the reader see more easily exactly what you are trying to convey.

Well done

thank you and please keep writing

Jen-JG

[forfila]

I like it, I like it,, deep thoughts and questions,,, very well written and worded.. Nice!!

[thecoolone52]

yeah i liked this poem and i try to guess what other people are thinking and saying but its hard to walk in other peoples shoes... you know what i mean??? ANyway nice write i enjoyed your prespective!!!

[Constance]

I love this. Thank you so much for bringing it to my attention!
Very true, simple and yet a fascinating read. You crafted well, here.

[Victor]

I like how the writer wrote this how it's got a much deeper meaning because you might something of yourself and others will see it totaly different... This is a good piece of work Write some more!

[King James]

Leaves you in a state of shock and awe...the writer speak with much justified blodness! Nice write!