The Voice That Speaks Inside My head

Every morning, i hear a voice

It's inside of my head, and it keeps telling me the same lies everyday

"I can make you feel better.... all you have to do is listen"

Every day, i fall into this trap

The voices try to break me, sometimes they win

They make me cry a beautiful crimson from my veins

The voices make me feel like I'm nothing,

Slowly they pull me under as I listen closer

Then it hits me, I'm drowning they're dragging me deeper into the abyss of my mind

Through my eyes I stare into nothingness

My eyes, they are too tired to cry

I feel nothing

I feel numb

Maybe I don't know it and they've already won...

Reviews

[Black Rose]

You expressed it very well. Fighting with our innerself is a tough task but I hope you will win in the battle between you and your mind. :)

[King Spark]

Thank you very much. And it is a struggle but i hope i will win the battle between me and my mind too :)

[Papa Ray Hurst]

very well expressed, i like it.
i sure hope that you are winning now

[King Spark]

Thank you. And they'll win the battle, but they'll never win the war, no matter how hard they try, there's always a way by.

[Papa Ray Hurst]

when our dreams are big enough we can do amazing things in life

[King Spark]

We can, we just hope our dreams don't break and fall apart, but no matter how determined, we can achieve those dreams

[AcasualPawn]

Excellent thoughts....... In my case they laziness and they always won............

[King Spark]

Thank you, and aww you'll get by and beat them someday, in my opinion when they win the first couple times, you get stronger and are able to beat them more often. I think you'll be able to beat them

[lostinthewaves]

I can really feel you in this, like it's as if you're speaking to me in person. You're emotions really show through.As far as the voices go, they're absolutely wrong. Keep writing, it's a great outlet. Its gotten me through a lot of stuff. I wish you the best of luck with whatever struggles that you come across.

[King Spark]

Thank you, that means a lot to me. And i'll be still be fighting them off even when i don't want them there, there's always a way through

[Najam Us Saher]

You really expressed your emotions very well.

[King Spark]

Thank you :)

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺

[spazzam101]

I can relate so much its a really good poem

[King Spark]

Thank you, it is something we have to deal with daily, sometimes it can be good with happy moments, but mostly it's bad for us all

[DarkArtz 0703]

I still love it ever time I read that one spark
though it still makes me cry

[King Spark]

Awww, I know, even though i wrote it i still get sad when i read it

[DarkArtz 0703]

I get sad when I read things that you write for me.... because I cant be there with you

[King Spark]

aww i know babe, i' the same whenever i read anything you write for me ... i really want you here

[DarkArtz 0703]

and I really want you here too