April/15/2014

Just stuff I wrote down as the night went on.

10:36pm.
The people I see today are not the people I will see Tomorrow.  They are all the sin of their shadow. I See the worst and the best of them. They repeat the first line of wasteland and the last line of TSAR. They crawl and laugh. They love and they hate. They are all gone. Gone from today. tomorrow will be different and shrouded in dark. I hate today. I want the past. I want sight. I want not knowing.

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11:45pm

I did not realize how I was to people before I lost myself.

I think the idea is separate throughout the group.

Everyone is different. Everyone is stupid

I am stupid enough to realize I am stupid.

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12:07 am

I have lost myself in the shadow.

I am addicted to soma.

I am the thing I did not want.

I have conformed and I am stupid

I fall as I sit. I am here nor there.

I am a fallen hero.

I am... Dead.

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12:13am

Today is different.

Today is full of sin

Today is night.

Tonight will be forgot.

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1:15 am

Today is a lie. Today is a day full of sin and sorrow. I can not forget about the morals I have lost nor can I forget about my stupidity. I am forever bond to my shadow.

Today I am not. Today I am sin. I can not forgive myself or everyone

We are all dead. We are all a symbol of sin.

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The stair-steps have a dead body on it.

Screams throughout the house.

The giant rising to quiet the illiterate.

I sit here listening to noise.

Noise that is stupid to virgin ears. We are unfortunate to have a sinless soul in our present.

We are the corrupted youth in the eyes of God.

He sees us as we see sin. We see him as he stare.

What We are. what we are. We are.. Unfortunate

Author's Note

TSAR = The Sun Also Rises by Ernest Hemingway

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

"He sees us as we see sin. We see him as he stare.
What We are. what we are. We are.. Unfortunate"
A amazing use of words and thoughts. I enjoyed the flow of the story leading to the above and strong closing lines. I like the simple but true wisdom. Thank you for sharing the outstanding story.
Coyote

[ProfessorPadilla]

Thank you Coyote!

[wordman]

I am bond to my shadow pretty much covers it great rant of a man with a great mind

[ProfessorPadilla]

Thank you Wordman!