Carry on

I don't know where I have been

Theres so much I haven't seen

Something new I learn everyday

A new hobby could take me away

I used to keep myself locked

But now I see it and I am shocked

How could I not have known?

I am no longer torn

This change was long due

Although I didn't believe I would come through

And now that the venom is gone

I have strength to carry on

Reviews

[Scott Metro]

You snapped out of it....
Nice little write here..

Enjoyed it

Scott

[ProCoacoa]

Thank you Scott!

[Raymond Federle]

A poem with a heartbeat, moving ever forward to the betterment of it's master. Well Done! :)

[ProCoacoa]

Thanks Raymond :)

[sonnie ibadah]

a simple but very inspiring piece....thanx for sharing

[ProCoacoa]

Thank you Sonnie :)

[Sami Khalil]

The strength within...A powerful poem...:)..................

[ProCoacoa]

Thank you Sami :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

We always have that strength within ourselves. We just don't know how to wake it up. LOL
Glad you had awaken it now, pro.
This has great rhythm and rhyme.
Cheers!

[ProCoacoa]

Thanks Dhaye :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Sometimes we are so bitter for so long we don't realize when we are'nt any more.All the while life is passing us by.Lovely my friend:)

[ProCoacoa]

Thanks a lot Vidya! Your reviews are always a pleasure to read.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome and now i should say thank you lol :)