My Promise

Before you decide you're falling

Look to your right, then left

I will always be there for you

Its a secret that I've kept

I know beforehand

If you're about to fall

So don't make false impressions

They aren't true at all

Because my hands are always stretched

To keep you from breaking

So don't you think you're alone

I'm right behind you, its a promise Im making

And lastly, please note

Your sadness is mine too

So lets share it together

It'll be divided between us two

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

What a truly lovely way to say you will always be there for someone.Love this poem it is great!!!

[ProCoacoa]

Thank you so much Vidya!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are very welcome

[one sky]

One word dear poet: AWESOME!

I like your style of writing. You're brilliant but not discovered. Keep writing!

[ProCoacoa]

Thank you so much! That really means a lot! And I love your poems too, they are really refreshing.