How I made my day!...(episode 1: hi, I am Dev)

The story is about how a young boy who is terrible at keeping social relations...has trouble with making friendship​s...makes his day

Hi My name is Dev.....I am ten now. I live in city called Nagpur. I am an Indian and I am proud of it.
I live with my mom and my grandma. My father past away when I was two. I haven't met my father's family since then.
My mom is all I've got. And I don't wanna let her down.
Today is a normal day for of my life. I'll wake up by 5 AM get ready by 6:30 and will be off to school by 7. Most of the kids, when they go to their schools get together with their friends and groups, they have fun​, they chat all the time, they have their lunch together and blah blah blah!...
That is their normal life, but mine is a little bit different. I am just a plain guy, I mean I never stood out. I am average at study, I am average at sports, I don't talk a lot, I don't have any close friends either. honestly my life sucks......
It's vacations​ now...a whole year of loneliness has come to an end...
It's breakfast time now. But while I was doing my breakfast mom gave me a big surprise. She said, "hey, we are going to live this city", "(staring with my eyes popped out)....., whatttt?", I said.
I was so surprised, my emotions were bursting out like crazy, I was happy that I was leaving that boring piece of s**t behind and moving on, on the other hand I was also scared, I had no idea of what was going to happen with me in the new school, I had tons of questions in my mind and the answer was nowhere to be found.
We moved to Pune. We had shifted into the new house, the vacation got over too, and finally my first day of the new academic year as well as the new school.
I transferred into Global View high school. it was a big school, I was scared and also excited to make new friends. I met my class teachers, I was about to enter my class, and what happened next..... I screwed up.. I tripped over..and fell, all the people in the classroom were laughing on me, I lost my only chance to make friends, I thought,
It was not true though. I was able to make a friend that day. And he is the best one I've got.
His name is 'Karan'.
To be continued....

Author's Note

Hello people this is my first story hope you like it
Please reply if like my story....
Also give suggest some ideas if you want to....

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Priyanshu Deshmkh,
"How I mad my day"
This was very enjoyable to read!. Real life experiences like this are precious. Stages of life come and go and are what we learn from, opportunities to become bitter of better.
I hope that you continue to grow as a writer and as a person. Your relationship with your mother does shine in the this story. Honor is so important! Good for you.
Honest writing right from the heart sometimes has some mistakes the first time but as you edit and polish great satisfaction and enjoyment can be derived. Look through it and polish it a little more as it is such a pretty story.
Loved it!
Blessings, Kathy