Just Like Else...

Just Like Else...

Just like other stars

one day you'll shine in me,

and the other day

you'll be the star of someone else sky.

Just like else,

you will enter me ,and leave me

if I don't stop you...

Just like else, you'll capture my heart,

and like none you'll return back,

stealing me forever.

Reviews

[Airafh]

Just like (everyone) else I loved this poem. Beautiful

[Priyanshi]

Hahaha...thnk u so much. :))

[Surya]

Desire to be with, and hope for love....
Fun play...
I liked it....:)

[Priyanshi]

hahaha...Even hope is also just like else....
Well, Thank you...thank you :))

[Najam Us Saher]

I liked the way you compare person with a star and the way they brighten your life and leave. Very interesting.

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much for the words:))

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. ☺

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very well written, 'just like else' this really sound good

[Priyanshi]

Thank you Farhan so much
:))

[barleygirl]

Your mysterious words are so whimsical, I don't even think of a regular "beloved" as being the object of this narrator's words. Your words could be written to address another person in the human form, but I find myself thinking about God or the ghost of some beloved who's died. The love object of this poem seems to be "out there" in the universe, in a way that's not accessible to the human form, but always present for the invisible & uplifting connection. Love that idea (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Priyanshi]

I wrote the poem remembering a human being who's alive Ma'am ....and i loved the way you perceived it as a poem can give various meanings....hahaa....
Loved your review as always...because like others you too provide an honest review.:))
(((HUGS)))

[Pooja Chintamani]

This one is fantastic ..the heart of Galaxy star..you pushed the feelings up..

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much Pooja for the lovely words and review:))

[Pooja Chintamani]

This one is fantastic ..the heart of Galaxy star..

[wordman]

stealing your heart,stars in the sky shining on you
lets say forever

[Priyanshi]

Loved the lines....
Thank you so much Sir for lovely review...:))

[wordman]

my pleasure