How Beautiful It Is!

How beautiful is the hold of two hearts!

bespeaks, their stronghold in every war.

Breathin' in oaths, never to get ever apart

in any danger, even in a wars' shower.

 

How beautiful is the hold of two hands!

shows their intense love's race for each other.

Will remain, good friends, will set new trends

in love, dedications as if love is their Godfather.

 

How wonderful their love is! so grounded!

 

Reviews

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Nice poetry my friend...........:)

[Simone Davis]

Beautiful flowing poem about love

[Priyanshi]

Thank u so much, friend.

[Poetic Beauty]

Tender and sweet emotions pour from each line in this poem

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much,friend.:)

[wordman]

sweet emotions,love will seat you

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, friend.

[barleygirl]

I am seeing many new year messages that are asking for love & peace & understanding. I believe 2018 might be a perfect year to start changing our current world of strife & violence. Your well-written message shows me that you are in the same state of mind, as far as focusing on what's important in life, & between people! Love this uplifting point of view! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, friend:)

[Mavericks]

Beautifully penned, Priya. Woh vampire waala Novel kab aa raha market me? Lol.

[Priyanshi]

Haha...usko abhi start krna hai meine...fir market ka kuch sochna padega....waise thank u and Happy New Year.
:)

[Mavericks]

Same to you. =)

[Najam Us Saher]

Indeed it is beautiful, very well expressed. I truly felt the warmth of such compassion through your words.

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much,Najam.
Happy New Year.

[Najam Us Saher]

You're welcome. Same to you.

[Farhan Shaikh]

Very suitable title, very well penned and I liked this a lot

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, Farhan.