A Lonely Street

It's just an imagination.

A lass rambling alone in  a street,

Hedged by murky street lights.

Her gloomy eyes gazed at

Those murky street lights

All of a sudden, a little girl rushed

And hold her from the back.

The lassie looked  back,

but Alas! None was there.

She remembers her little sister,

Who is no more with  her.

She recalls her deep sick  memories

Memories as  deep as  a well.

 She gained pain again

with tears bursting her eyes

and she walked ahead in lonely street.

Author's Note

Another try by me and my little cute, cousin, Madhu.
Hope you like it.
Thank u, Surya.

Reviews

[Pragati Chaudhary]

Thats really good work :)

[Priyanshi]

Thank you so much, friend, for the kind visit and review.

[Pragati Chaudhary]

:) you are welcome Priyanshi :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

imagining that lost loved one still holding us, protecting us...
you create a haunting feeling with this one, Priyanshi.
j.

[Priyanshi]

Yep, that was the motive of mine and my cousin...thank you so much for the kind review and visit.

[Zoya]

Ah, quite sad. We always do grieve the loss of our loved ones...they're hard to forget. Was a bit scary to read. Good job.

[Priyanshi]

Scary..hmm...it is..Thank you so much, dear, for the kind review and visit.

[Zoya]

My pleasure!

[barleygirl]

I have often said that the loved ones & pets who've died are following me along & I can feel them like they're on my shoulder watching me. In your poem, you take this idea further as if the departed one is a haunting ghost following & tormenting. Good way to tell a story within a pretty short poem, as it feels complete & takes the reader on a journey.

[Priyanshi]

yeah, that's true, Thanks a ton for the kind review and visit...'m glad to read the comment.

[Kesha]

Aww a very sad write! Indeed heartbreaking, but beautifully written :)

[Priyanshi]

Hey...after a long time...am happy to see you again...thank you so much, dear for the lovely review .

[Kesha]

Decided to come back for a bit :) lol and you are very welcome :)

[mou]

it melts the heart..very sad yet you describe it with so much strength that anyone could relate with it..beautiful Priyanshi

[Priyanshi]

Thank you sooo much, Mou...'m glad that for the kind review and visit.Thanks once again.

[mou]

most welcome :)

[Hope]

A good picture you painted Priyanshi!
Thanks for writing and sharing this poetess!
Also a big thank you to your cousin:)

[Priyanshi]

Okay, thank you so so much from me and my cousin , dear...glad to read the kind review.

[Prashant Bajpai]

good try my dear blessings

[Priyanshi]

thank you so much friend fot the kind review and visit.
Please do not add dear.don't mind it.

[wordman]

touching write,sad thoughts

[Priyanshi]

Thank you Friend so much for kind visit and words.

[wordman]

my pleasure

[Wajiha Nayeem]

such a nycc work.....i loved it...and i wud evn appreciate su for this...

[Priyanshi]

Hey, dear, thank you sooo much for the appreciation.