Wanna See You Smile

Fade up and  stressful you  look;

Embroiled and entangled in a trap,

In a trap of destructive thoughts,

And that's so painful, so leave  that,

And  come out with a smile

 

Those glinting eyes lost their spark

When pain slammed on you.

Face turning into dark pale,

Coming through that,

 I wanna see you smile.

 

The phases you are passing through

Is known to me, yet I'm  helpless

Though  I wanna help you

Because I wanna see you smile

 

You stood out as an inspiration,

 for me, always there in the places

Where I needed you and still need you,

So I wanna see you smile.

 

Though a couple of times  we spent

And you became my best friend

Ah, a sweet bond of friendship exist

So, I wanna see you smile.

 

Miles of distances we carry

Still, we are great buddies

because heart are connected,

And so I wanna see you smile

 

 Your problems are known to me,

Yet no ideas to solve them

I'm feeling disgusted now,

And need  you to make me smile,

 

   I always needed you

And still, need you

And will need you

So I wanna see you smile.

Author's Note

Still, a try to bring that lost smile of someone.... hope the readers like it. I know, the poem need to be edited, but still ...I wanted to present it in the way it came from my heart. Thanks .

Reviews

[Maria]

Truly inspiring. If we would all take time, to make someone smile and forget about their troubles, for only a minute or two. More of this is needed as the world in whole, is crying out in fear and rage, as ISIS continues to plot and kill many here and there.

[Priyanshi]

Yeah, agree with you..
Thank you so much, Maria for the appreciating review...thanks once again.

[Maria]

You are very welcomed

[Lyric]

This is a sweet poem! Even though life can be hard we never wanna see our loved ones down. I love the way this was written :)

[Priyanshi]

Thank you, Friend so much.....You loved my poem, i'm happy....thanks for your kind visit and review.

[wordman]

just wanna see you smile,cause i`m in love with you,so smile

[Priyanshi]

Hey, thank you , sir so much....'m happy with your review and thanks once again.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

i would always want to see a smile on my beloved's face!!...and everybody would do the same thing for their beloved one....i loved this work of yours...the font was quite chota!!...
but the poetry was amazing.

[Priyanshi]

Oops! I think that spoiled your joy of reading....next time I shall keep in mind.
Thank you, sooooo much dear, i always love your reviews.... thank you Wajiha, so much.

[Wajiha Nayeem]

always a pleasure dear.....

[Mr.Writer]

Thank you for bringing a smile to us, the readers :)
This was really hopeful and inspirational as well!
Well done, keep it up!

[Priyanshi]

Thank you, Mr. writer....I'm glad to read your review and it brought smile to you...thank you for visit and review, and for appreciation too.

[Mr.Writer]

No problem :)
I really wanna thank you tbh

[Priyanshi]

sorry, but tbh means?....

[Mr.Writer]

oh lol, it means "to be honest" :)

[Prashant Bajpai]

see hearty things can never be edited even if you are editing then it not your true one so keep doing never edit are required every time you might have heard simplicity is never out of date.... and this when i was reading the poem it was like something people usually say to me to smile you are beautiful and amazing writer, will love to read more from you!!! keep sharing

[Priyanshi]

Thank you, so much, for the appreciating review....even i believe in simplicity...You'll surely read some more in future...thanks.

[Prashant Bajpai]

thankiew if you are letting me read some more of yours

[Surya]

Words from heart that's what poetry is....
I felt the message...
Each and every word is like someone trying to convey to me......
It's beautiful and I loved it...:)

[Priyanshi]

Thank you Surya, for the appreciation.
You too are my friend...and that's for you also....I'm glad that you found it beautiful....thanks once again.

[Surya]

Haha, Thanks again for your concern, am delighted...:)

[Priyanshi]

then, my pleasure...if my friends are happy ,then i'm happy.

[Najam Us Saher]

It is really good when friends try to cheer their friends...very honest poem...I liked it...

[Priyanshi]

Thank you, dear ....I'm trying to do that...Thank you so much once again, for your kind review and visit...

[Najam Us Saher]

You are most welcome... :)

[Sikandar Khan]

So nice Poem And Best Way To Realize Your Friend You Are Upset because he/she is upset You want to See Him/her Happy.....May Soon Smile COmes....

[Priyanshi]

Hey, thank you for understanding that point....and I hope so.....thanks for your kind review and visit, friend.

[writ rajat]

I will suggest you one thing if you agree although the poem is scintillating and mind boggling

[Priyanshi]

Okay, then I must follow your advice and next time I'll keep it in my mind ,while writing any other.....Thank you Rajat, so much for your kind review and visit .

[writ rajat]

Keep thinking about the topic for three days note down creativity and then start working