Happy Birthday to you! Happy Birthday to you! Happy Birthday Dear Tanvi! Happy Birthday to you! Happy Birthday & Have an Awesome & Blessed Day! Love Im His Daughter
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you , so so so much, friend...a great thanks from both of us to you...thank you for blessing u.. read moreThank you , so so so much, friend...a great thanks from both of us to you...thank you for blessing us...thank you.
seem to be quite good but it could have been more beautiful
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Yeah, but more edit wasn't done with it.....anyways, thank you so much Prashant, for your review and.. read moreYeah, but more edit wasn't done with it.....anyways, thank you so much Prashant, for your review and visit.
7 Years Ago
yeah i know and belated happy birthday to your sister and invite you to visit my ones also
Hello Priyanshi and Tanvi! God bless you both. Love this wonderful 'Big Sister' poem, so filled with love and laughter... Always wished I had a sister! Great words, form, flow. Excellent work!
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Aww, so so sweet of you , Annette...Thanks you so so much....for blessings too. Thank you once again.. read moreAww, so so sweet of you , Annette...Thanks you so so much....for blessings too. Thank you once again.
Awww so cute and sweet poem... This poem and ur words shows how much u love and care of ur sister... U such a beautifully described ur deep thoughts for ur sister... Truly it is such a beautiful poem... Well done and keep it up dear...
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Hey, a big thanks to you,...thanks for your sweet words.
How very kind you are. I am sure Tanvi will treasure you too. Your poem has been well written and gives a sense of loving 'urgency' which build up to the finale 'You're my life, O dear sister, Tanvi.' Loved it!
Am a girl
who desires to travel a journey
from the dream world to the real world,
Livin' the beautiful dreams on the land of reality.
MY LINES-----
"Never did sacrifice a jewel of min.. more..